'class-blog-meeting' Semester 3 a 'stating reasons' paragraph

Hello, my dear spiritful students. I hope you are doing fine with this meeting. Today we are about to learn how to write paragraph stating reasons. Your handbook may fully support your learning today to if you open page 121. Yet, before stepping forward to the lesson, I want you to watch a video linked here.

Now, do write in the comment box below. First, write an outline about reasons why tourists must visit Indonesia. State at least five (5) reasons. Post your Outline using this format:

Topic Sentence: Indonesia is .......country to visit for several reasons.

Reason A: _______________________________
Example: _____________________________
Example: _____________________________
Reason B: _______________________________
Example: _____________________________
Reason C: _______________________________
Example: _____________________________
Concluding sentence:_______________

Then write a paragraph elaborating the outline you have made.

Foreword

Hi, guys! How are you doing? I am extremely enthusiastic having you here in 'class-blog-meeting'. As you can read the description of the use of this blog in the home page, then youcan also see your works here being posted. Moreover, you can find paragragraphs written by your classmates too. Therefore, I suggest you to leave comment on your classmates' works. Your comment should be about the writing mechanics (punctuation marks, capitalization, and spelling), the organization (topic sentence, specific supporting details, and approppriate concluding sentence), the content (is it interesting to read?), and granmar and sentence structure.

Descriptive Paragraph

Writing II Task IV

Ade Riska Suryani ( 20131111073)

Mitha’s Room

Today, I will describe Mitha’s room. The Mitha’s room is well arranged. On the left of room, there is a television. On the next is a small desk. On the desk, there are equipments of cosmetic and books. Behind the desk, there is a small window. Opposite the desk, there is big bed with three pillows, bolster, and  pink doll. On the top built in bed, there are bags, books, box, candle and purse. All these thing make I say “Her room is comfortable place to take a race. It is a good place for relax and sleep in the night”. So, Mitha is organized  girl.

~ DONE~

Descriptive Paragraph

Name : Ari Roikhannah ( 20131111071 )

Writing 2. Task 4

The Family Room

The family room is a neat and large enough. Near the door, there are a table and a bookshelves. On the right of the door is a table. On the table, there are a laptop and printer. In front of the table, there is a chair. The color is white and it’s made of plastic. The next of table is a bookshelves. Bookshelves are on the right of table. The colour is blue and there image is angrybirds cartoon. These books are neatly arranged on the bookshelves. In front of the bookshelves, there is a chair too. The color is red and it’s made of iron. But, there are a plastic bag bound on the top of it.The colour, materials, and model each chairs look different. Look at the wall, there isa calendar. It is in the middle of table and bookshelves. The next of bookshelves is window. The window is on the right bookshelves. The window looks big enough. Around of the wall, there are ceramics with orange colour and it looks good. So, the person who stays in that house is neat person.

Descriptive Paragraph

Yeshi’s bedroom is look great, comfortable and large enough. First you open the door, you will face simple design bed. Spreadsheet and bed cover are well organized. She puts a cute combination between spreadsheet and bedcover color. On the right bed there is simple toilet with make-up properties neatly arranged. She gives a sweet touch of flower on the toilet. There is DVD on the small table besides the toilet. Not far from that, there is little cupboard with television on it. The television facing to the bed. Behind the toilet and the television is simple curtain design with nice color which is covering the window. I think in this room has a good lighting by the Sun that come out of the window. In addition this room is very cute because the wall’s color is peach. Based on condition above, I conclude that Yeshi is Organized person.

Name :Auliahwati

NIM : 20131111075

Descriptive Paragraph

The Bedroom

The bed room looks neat and clean.There are one bed and one make up table. The make up table in the left side of the bed. On the top of the bed there is a big photo frame of the owner. The big photo frame adhere in the wall. Under  the big photo frame there are two small photo frame on the bed. One photo in the right corner and one photo in the middle of the bed. In the middle of that, there is one dholpin doll with purple and white colours. In the left tip of the bed there is one room fragrance. On the bed there is on matress with three pillow. It very clean and neat. In the left side of bed there is one the make up table. It have a big mirror and two small drawer. One drawer in the left side of mirror and one drawer under table. In front of mirror there is many equipment for make up like perfume, lotion, and face powder. Under table there is one small chair for make up. Behind the make up table there isi two windows. I think person who is stay in this room is organize person that always keep clean.

Descriptive Paragraph

Writing II Task 4

Ita’s bedroom

            The bedroom of the picture is simple. The left room is curtain. Actually closed curtain. The middle of this room is a bed. On the bed there are pillow, bolster, spreadsheet and fan. A pillow and a bolster must be deserve. The owner must be change the spreadsheet with new one. Because it’s looks old spreadsheet. A fan on the bed room it must be standing in front of the cupboard. The right side of the bed is cupboard, actually black cupboard. There is pink wall behind of a bed and a cupboard. Opposite the cupboard is door. Because the bed room not light, it make looks dark room around there. Based on the condition of the bed room which has been described, that the peron is disorganized person.