Hello, my dear spiritful students. I hope you are doing fine with this meeting. Today we are about to learn how to write paragraph stating reasons. Your handbook may fully support your learning today to if you open page 121. Yet, before stepping forward to the lesson, I want you to watch a video linked here.
Now, do write in the comment box below. First, write an outline about reasons why tourists must visit Indonesia. State at least five (5) reasons. Post your Outline using this format:
Topic Sentence: Indonesia is .......country to visit for several reasons.
Reason A: _______________________________
Example: _____________________________
Example: _____________________________
Reason B: _______________________________
Example: _____________________________
Reason C: _______________________________
Example: _____________________________
Concluding sentence:_______________
Then write a paragraph elaborating the outline you have made.
Now, do write in the comment box below. First, write an outline about reasons why tourists must visit Indonesia. State at least five (5) reasons. Post your Outline using this format:
Topic Sentence: Indonesia is .......country to visit for several reasons.
Reason A: _______________________________
Example: _____________________________
Example: _____________________________
Reason B: _______________________________
Example: _____________________________
Reason C: _______________________________
Example: _____________________________
Concluding sentence:_______________
Then write a paragraph elaborating the outline you have made.
Topic Sentence: Indonesia is awesome country to visit for several reasons.
BalasHapusReason A: Nature places
Example: The awesome nature places such as…(example)
Example: Spent a lot of time, but the view worth the wait
Reason B: culture
Example: Interesting culture make tourist excited
Reason C: Culinary
Example: Has a good taste
Example: Simple recipes and easy to cook
Reason D: Artistic
Example: Indonesian people is a great artist
Reason E: Friendly people
Example: help visitors and tourist and make a good service for them
Concluding sentence: For those five reasons, I recommend that Indonesia is an awesome country to spend your vacation to get wonderful experience in there.
The Awesomeness Indonesia
Indonesia is an awesome country to spend a vacation for five reasons. The first reason is nature places. Indonesia has beautiful nature places, such as pink beach in komodo island, mount ranjani in Lombok, mount bromo, kawah ijen in East Java, and many more. Although it spent a lot of time to go, but the view worth the wait. Visitors can swim and snorkeling in clear sea, hiking in amazing mountain and get a fresh clear air also. Second reason is culture. Indonesia has unique culture, such as make batik, play wayang, traditional dance, play traditional musical instrument, and many more. That’s make tourist interested about Indonesian culture and attract them to come in Indonesia. For the example, in Jakarta ceremony, that use sunda tradition and have different way to celebrate the moment. The third reason is culinary. Some Indonesian food had been include as world most delicious food, such as rendang, sate, soto, and nasi goreng. Most of Indonesian food cooked with various spices. Even it contained a various spices, the recipe was simple and easy to cook. Those foods being famous because it served when there are special guest and ceremonial occasion. The fourth reason is artistic. Indonesia has wonderful artistic. Indonesian people are a great artist. Therefore, many kind of antiques made by Indonesian hand people and have a classical high touch. Most of tourists come to learn how to make hand craft, such as pottery, statuette, and many more. The fifth reason is friendly people. Indonesia has a friendly and harmful people. They also help visitors to get what they need, such as by tour guide, they give all information and good service to make visitors feel comfort and satisfied. For those five reasons, I recommend that Indonesia is an awesome country to spend your vacation to get wonderful experience in there.
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BalasHapusMy wonderful Indonesia
BalasHapusTopic Sentence: Indonesia is wonderful country to visit for several reasons.
Reason A : Kind of food
Example : In Indonesia have Rujak Soto and Sego Tempong from Banyuwangi
Example : There are Soto Ayam and Wingko from Lamongan
Reason B : The unique culture
Example : In Indonesia There are Tari Rantaya Putri from Solo, Central Java and Tari Muwangsangkal From Madura
Example : Indonesia has many special languange in each area
Reason C : Tourism place
Example : There are nature place like Pink beach in Lombok, Bromo mountain in Bromo and Toba lake in Medan
Example : There are many historical buildings in Central Java for example: Borobudur temple and Prambanan
Reason D : Kind People
Example : Indonesia has many kind people that have tolerant for each religion
Example : People Indonesia are polite for each other
Reason E : Cheap payment
Example : Many cheap things that made by Indonesia like bag, clothes, etc
Example : Get the food,transportation, hotel with cheap payment.
My wonderful Indonesia
Indonesia is a wonderful country that has many nature view, kinds of traditional food, special language and amny more. In indonesia There is kind of food that have different taste and kind in each area. For eaxampe, Rujak Soto and Sego Tempong from Banyuwangi, Soto ayam and Wingko from Lamongan and Batagor and Siomay from Bandung. You have to taste all kind of food in this country because so manygood taste and kind in there. Indonesia has the unique culture, such as traditional dance and special language. For example, there is tari Rantaya Putri and Gambyong from Solo and tari Muwangsangkal from Madura. You can visit all of those place and see how wonderful this country. There are many special language in each area like in Java,Madura and Medan. Tourism place in Indonesia it’s too many for inctance, Gili Labak beach from Madura, Pink beach from Lombok and Toba lake from Medan. Indonesia has historical place too, such as Borobudur and Prambanan temple in Central Java and Tugu Pahlawan in Surabaya. That reason why you have to visit in this country because too many history of Indonesia in there. Many kind people in Indonesia that have tolerant of many religion to each other and there are many polite people that we can meet. In Indonesia, you can get the cheap payment. Such as to buy accesories that made by Indonesia and all service with cheap payment like transportation, hotel, etc. Indeed, Indonesia has many wonderful thing and reason why you have to visit and enjoy.
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HapusName : Rita Nurhalimah
BalasHapusNIM : 20141111011
My Beloved Country,Indonesia
Indonesia is a great country to visit for several reasons.
Reason A : The Under Water Life
Example : Bunaken
Reason B: The Historical Buildings
Example: Borobudur temple
Prambanan temple
Reason C : The Beaches
Example: Pink Beache,Komodo
Pandawa Beach
Tomini Bay
Reason D : The Food
Example : Sate Ayam
Nasi Kuning
Rendang
Reason E : The warm people
Example : Friendly
My Beloved Country, Indonesia
Good afternoon, everybody. In this good opportunity, I would like to suggest you to visit to my beloved country, Indonesia. As we know, that Indonesia is a huge country in South East Asia. Indonesia is a great place to spend a vacation for five reasons. First, Indonesia has a beautiful place in the under water. For instance, Bunaken island which is located at the north of the island of Sulawesi is one of Indonesia’s most famous diving and snorkeling area. You can see many fish species that live in the western Pacific Ocean. The first time you visit in Bunaken, you will never forget the wonderful of panorama of Bunaken. Not only for diving, you can also take some picture of the view in Bunaken Island.Second, Indonesia has many historical buildings that can make you to look back the history of those buildings in Indonesia. It is good for the foreigners who want to know the history. For example, there is a Borobudur temple which is the largest Buddist temple in the world. It is found in Java that is made of 2.000 relief panels and over 500 Buddha statues. This temple is an amazing monument to see.Often crowded in the day,one of the best time to explore the temple is early in the morning when you can watch the sunrise while standing at the very top.After that,still in Central Java, simply heading to the beautiful Prambanan temple. It is a Hindu temple with special feminine architecture.Do not just see it or walk home immediately, you can enjoy the Rama and Sinta performance in Prambanan and the best time is when full moon you can get the mystical thing. Third, Indonesia has so many beautiful beaches,such as, Pink Beach, Tomini Bay, Pandawa Beach.I suggest you to visit to Pink Beach,Komodo.It is a wonderful place that can reassure you in there. You can enjoy the tropical rainforest and golden sandy beaches. It is made from red and white sand. Not only enjoying the view of the beach, you can also try snorkeling or diving,or stay on dry land and head out in search of the island’s most famous resident,komodo dragons. Another beach that I can offer to you is Tominy Bay.It is located in the north of Sulawesi.You can get up earlyfor beautiful sunrise,then jump abroad with some friendly fishermen for a day sailing or go under the waves to see wonders of the scuba world. It is really great beach.You will never regret to visit it.Fourth,each of countries has special food including Indonesia.Indonesia has nice food.For the foreigners, you have to try it.Some best food that I suggest you,such as,rendang,sate ayam,and nasi kuning.Rendang is really popular dish in Indonesia that is actually a dry beef stew.It is originated from Minangkabau in west Sumatera. Rendang is basically meat,normally beef but sometimes liver,chicken,goat,or other meats.Another one is sate ayam.It is skewered and grilled chicken serve with flavorful peanut sause.It is also known as national dish in Java.The other is nasi kuning.It is a famous Indonesian breakfast rice cooked in coconut milk and turmeric.Fifth,the special of Indonesian is the warm people.You can sense a warm smiling everywhere.Indonesian are naturally the type of people who take a great joy and pleasure in family and simple pleasures.Basically,all of Indonesian are friendly. Thus,Indonesia is a great place to go if you want to get an amazing vacation.
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Pandu Suyekti Syamsu
BalasHapus20141111015
• Topic Sentence : Indonesia is great country to visit for several reasons.
Reason A : Tourism place
Example : many beautiful beaches
Example : many mountains
Reason B : Many cultures
Example : unique languages
Example : traditional dance
Reason C : Traditional food
Example : soto ayam from Lamongan.
Example : rujak cingur from Surabaya City.
Reason D : Rare animal
Example : komodo in Nusa Tenggara Timur.
Example : tiger that is called Harimau Sumatera from Sumatera.
Reason E : Historical building
Example : Borobudur temple and Prambanan temple in Central Java.
Example : Tugu Pahlawan in Surabaya.
My lovely Indonesia
Indonesia is a great place to have an exciting vacation for five reasons. The first, Indonesia has many beautiful beaches in every different place like Kuta Beach in Bali, Pink Beach in Lombok, and Green Bay in Banyuwangi that are often visited by tourists. In there, you can sunbathe and swim till your skin becomes brown. There are high mountains that are usually hiked by visitors like Semeru in Java and Jaya Wijaya in Irian jaya. Secondly, there are many cultures in Indonesia like languages, for example, Javanese and Madura language and traditional dance, for example, Remo from Surabaya and Kecak from Bali. Those dances are very popular for tourists. Many tourists usually want to learn those when they have vacation here. Then, there is traditional food, for example, soto ayam from Lamongan and rujak cingur from Surabaya. The fourth, There are rare animals like Komodo from Nusa Tenggara Timur and tiger that is called Harimau Sumatera from Sumatera. Mostly tourist must be going to visit those places to see those animals. They are wild animals that are kept their preservation by the citizens. The last, there are historical buildings like Borobudur temple and Prambanan temple in Central Java. In Surabaya, there is Tugu Pahlawan as historical building as symbol of the residents struggle when they drove the colonists. Indeed, Indonesia is a wonderful place to get vacation if you like going outdoors.
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Name : Shinta Desmalasari
BalasHapusNim : 20141111043
Outline
Reason A : Unic culture
Example 1 : tradisional dance in Indonesia have story
Example 2 : Unique house costume
Reason B : taourism place
Example : Borobudur temple in jogyakarta
Example : Mount Bromo in Pasuruan
Reason C : Kind of food
Example : Rujak cingur in Surabaya
Example : Batagor in Bandung
Reason D : There is sea around there
Example : Fisherman more many
Example : Many kind fish in Indonesia’s sea
Reason E : Beautifull island
Example : You can go to bali
Eexample : You can go to Raja ampat-Papua
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Beautifull Place in Indonesia
Indonesia is beautifull country to visit with several reason. I have fifth reasons why you shoul go. First of all, Indonesia has unic culture. For example, tradisional dance in Indonesia have story like ramayana dance from Bali. In the dance tell about how Rama fight with rahwana to save his wife shinta whose help by hanoman. Indonesia also have unique house custom. Rumah gadang in Sumatra, it has unique roof and shape. The arsitektur is discripsion about their custom. The second reason is tourism place. Indonesia has many torism place, altought in every area has tourism place. For example, Borobudur temple in Jogyakarta, Mount Bromo in Pasuruan, Komodo island in Florest, and etc. The third reason is kind of food. Indonesia has many kind of food. If you visit Indonesia you should try some traditional food from Indonesia. You can eat Batagor from Bandung, Rujak Cingur from Surabaya, Soto from Madura, and etc. Indonesia’s food has good taste and the price is chep.
The fouth reason is there is sea around there. For example, People in Indonesia work as fisherman. Eventoght close citizen who live in coastal area work as fisherman and sell the fish as far as aboard. Indonesia has many kind of fish in the beach like nemo, swollen fish, rayfish, catfish, goldfish, and etc. The last reason is Indonesia has beautifull island. For example, you can visit Bali and Raja ampat-Papua. There you can see how beautifull Indonesia. Indonesia has many waterfall, beach, sea, and mountain. For these fifth reason, Indonesia is a beautifull country that can you visited for your holiday.
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HapusName : Maziyatul Minnah Nissa
BalasHapusNim : 20141111031
Reason A : Beautiful Place
Example : Many beautiful beach and ocean
Example : You can visit WBL beach in Lamongan
Reason B : Traditional Food
Example : Wingko from Babat
Example : Pempek fom Semarang
Reason C : Many Culture
Example : have many House Custom
Example : have many Dance traditional
Reason : D : Traditional art performer
Example : Wayang from java
Example : Lodrok from east java
Reason : E : Many Craft
Example : can produce ceramics
Example : can make Batik cloth
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GREAT PLACE
Indonesia is great place to vocation and have fifth reason. The first reason is beautiful place. Indonesia have many beautiful place in each region for example Parangtritis in Yogyakarta, in there have beauty of nature. If you visit in lamongan city you can visit in WBL have many games for example : crazy car, ghost house and other games. The second reason is traditional food. This country has many traditional food from example in babat there is wingko babat, wingko babat has a sense of sweet. If you visit in semarang you can also eat traditional food from semarang like pempek, pempek has sense that savory and delicious or if you eat pempek you may given soy sauce to dipped in pempek. The third reason is many culture. In each region have different culture, Indonesia has many house custom like Kalimantan, papua, east java and center java. Traditional dance has many different dance for example traditional dance from Bali the name of dance is Kecak dance and traditional dance from Bengkulu the name of dance is Andun dance. The fourth reason is traditional art performer. Every region always have traditional art performer because every month or every year always present for example wayang, wayang have always present in every activity, wayang made from leather. Lodrok is traditional from east java, lodrok like theater but the language use java. The fifth reason is many craft. Indonesia can produce Have many ceramicsb and batik has good cloth. For these reason, Indonesia is great place to vocation.
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HapusIZAR AISY SYAHDANIAR
BalasHapus20141111047
OUTLINE
Topic sentence : Indonesia is a beautiful country to visit for several reason
Reason A : traditional Food
Example :Rujakcingur, Rawon
ReasonB : Indonesia have many custom
Example :The Wedding custom from java
Reason C : Unique Culture
Example :Kecak , ReogPonorogo, Jaipong
Reason D : Tourism Place
Example :Candi Borobudur , CandiPrambanan
Reason E : The beautiful Island
Example : Raja Ampat , Bangka island
Beautiful Place from Indonesia
Indonesia is a beautiful country to visit several reason . The first reason is traditional food . The traditional food have multiform taste, for example rujakcingur from madura and rawon from java. The tourist can explore about culture in Indonesia. Second reason is unique culture. Indonesia has many traditional dance ,kecak from bali and reogponorogo from ponorogo .The third reason is tourism place. Tourism place from Indonesia especially the touris can visit to candi Borobudur still keep nature andcandiprambananhas many statue craft .the tourist can learn history from candiborobudur and candiprambanan . The forth reason is Indonesia have many custom. The wedding custom from java like the kingdom from yogyakartastill follow learn ancestor . The fifth reason is the beautiful island. Indonesia has many beautiful island like raja ampat from papua has various kind jellyfish ,turtle, sea horse. Bangka island from Bangka Belitung has various kind animal endangered animals. For this reason is Indonesia a beautiful country to visit several reason.
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SDs: 2.2
CS: 2
Indonesia Is Amazing Country To Visit For Several Reasons
BalasHapusThis country is a great place around the world. The first reason is natural scenary. It can be my mind refereshed and feel enjoyed living. Moreover, there are waterfall, tropical forest and some rivers with a heavy water so can make to rafting. The second reason is handicraft. This handicraft in this country have much items who’s famous around the world. One of them is Batik, weaving, painting and chisel and their items should we keep as the legacy of the ancestors this country. The third reason is culture. This culture become the character of a nation in each country, especially in this country there are many culture that I cannot to mention it one by one but I just give some examples like traditional dance, traditional clothes, custom home, puppet and the temple on the island of java. The fourth reason is nautical tourism. There are many wonderful places in this country about nautical tourism that make the foreign tourist or local tourist feel interested to visit there, for example about many fish, wonderful beach and also be supported by the coral reef in a sea of shallow. The last reason is plantation. This country was famous for natural resources, one of them is the plantation, it could produce a lot of income for this country about palm oil, mustard, paddy etc. Therefore, as one of the great country in the world, I must be able to always keep and improving the natural resource to useful in the future. For these five reason, I feel proud as citizens of Indonesia that filled with a variety of various parts cultures and languages.
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Hapussiti nur mulyani 20141111001
BalasHapusOutline
Reason A : Unique culture
Example 1 : there are traditional dances every region
Example 2 : there are region languages
Reason B : Traditional foods
Example 1 : every region have different traditional foods
Example 2 : the traditional foods have different taste
Reason C : tourism place
Example 1 : the tourism place are connect with indonesia culture such as borobudur temple, prambanan temple
Example 2 : natural tourism, such as kuta beach, sempu island, kenjeran beach
Beautiful place is indonesia
Indonesia is a right choice to vacation, I have three reasons. First off all, Indonesia has unique culture. For example, every region in Indonesia has traditional dances. The visitors can study about their dance such as, remo, kecak dance, jaipong dance. Then indonesia country has different languages in every region too. Second, Indonesia has traditional foods with different taste in every regions, such as lontong balap from surabaya, soto lamongan, gudeg yogyakarta. Third, in Indonesia has tourism place are connect with Indonesia culture such as borobudur temple, in borobudur temple has a history which famous in Indonesia, like as borobudur temple, Indonesia has a famous temple the location in Yogyakarta, the story is about a king who want to merried with a queen but the queen has a high requirement, and then the king receive her requirement. In Indonesia has many beautiful natural tourism, such as kuta beach in Bali, Sempu Island in Malang and kenjeran beach in Surabaya. Indeed, Indonesia is a beautiful and wonderful place to go if you like culture vocation.
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Name:Sitti Nurhayati Lolon
BalasHapusNim:20141111019
The Wonderful of Indonesia
Indonesia has wonderful place to visit for several reason.
Reason A: Different culture
Example: Spesific language
Kind of dance
Unique house costume
Reason B: Tourism places
Example : Bali
Raja Ampat, Papua
Reason c : historical Buildings
Example : Borobudur temple in Yogyakarta
Prambanan temple in Yogyakarta, Central Java
Reason D : Kinds of food
Example : Soto ayam from Lamongan
Rawon
Sate Ayam
Reason E : People in Indonesia
Example : Polite
Friendly
The Wonderful of Indonesia
Indonesia has wonderful place to visit for several reason.The first reason is culture.Every teorrity in Indonesia has many different language.For example,in Nusa Tenggara Timur Province has different language.Same like language in Indonesia has traditional dance and unique house costum.Many traditional dance like Remo dance in Surabaya,Pendet dance in Bali.Beside that,in Indonesia has unique house costum also.If you visit in many cities in Indonesia there are you can find the kind of unique house costume.The second reason is tourism place.So many tourism in other country in the world that visit in this place.In Bali you can enjoy with panorama beach in there.It is one of place that amazing in the world.The other palce is Raja Ampat beach in Papua.It is beautiful place too.If you go there, you can see that beach directly.Not only enjoy the beach but also you can enjoy the sunrise and sunsite.The third reason is historical building. The historical building in Indonesia has many histories in every building.In Yogyakarta there is Borobudur temple. It is the largest Buddist temple in the world.It has thousand relief in that temple.The other temple is Prampaban.It is in Centre Java.In there you can enjoy the panorama.The fourth reason is food.Indonesia has many different kind of food.Such as,in Lamongan you can find soto Lamongan. If you visit in Surabaya there are sate,rawon,and the others.Every country in Indonesia has different traditional food too.You can enjoy it,if you visit there.The fifth reason is Indonesia people.Indonesian are polite.They are always smile when they meet the other people.Beside that,they are very friendly.In summary,Indonesia is wonderful place to visit if you have spare time.
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OUT LINE :
BalasHapusIndonesia is an admirable country to visit for several reasons.
Reason A : A flawless nature.
Example : Beautiful islands, attractive beaches and waterfall.
Reason B : Unique culture
Example : Traditional dance, material art, culinear.
Reason C : luxurious tourism places
Example : exclusive resort, historical tample.
Admirable Country
Indonesia is an admirable country to visit for several reasons. First of all, Indonesia has a flawless nature. For example, there are so many beautiful islands around Indonesia, such as Lombok island, Bali island, and many more. Indonesia also has attractive beaches and waterfalls in each island in Indonesia. You will find a very beautiful scenery and an emerald water that you can't compare it with any places. Second, Indonesia is a country with a unique culture. It has many traditional dances which is different from each place. For example, remo dance which is from East Java and zavir dance from Bawean island. Beside that, indonesia also has an original material art called silat. And also Indonesia has traditional ceremony differently in each ethnic which is absolutly will give you a beautiful experience. Third, Indonesia is full with luxurious tourism places. For instance, Indonesia has many historical places that is worth to visit. Such as, borobudur temple, prambanan temple and many more. Not only that, you can also easily find an exclusive resort for you to stay an relax in Indonesia. If you are someone who enjoy adventure, you can also enjoy an adventure underwater by snorkling and enjoy the underwater scenery which you will never forget. Indeed, Indonesia is a very admirable country to visit because of its nature, culture, and the tourism places.
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Nila Rachmania Devi
BalasHapus20141111021
Outline
Topic Sentence : Indonesia is an awesome country to visit for three reasons.
Reason A : Indonesia has many islands, wonderful nature, and beautiful panorama
Example : Sumatera, Jawa, Sanur Beach, Bromo Mountain, and etc
Reason B : Indonesia has many cultures attraction
Example : Tradisional dance, music, art and food
Reason C : Indonesians people and hospitality
Example : Hotel, Spa, Restaurant and etc
Concluding sentence : Indonesia is an awesome country to visit because of these three reasons
Amazing Indonesia
Indonesia is an awesome country to visit for three reasons. First of all, Indonesia has many islands, such as Sumatera, Java, Kalimantan, Bali, Papua and etc. From these several islands, you can enjoy the beautiful panorama and wonderful nature that different from each island. You can visit to Sanur beach in Bali, Bromo mountain in Java, Tikalong waterfall in Kalimantan, and another tourism places in another island. Second, Indonesia has diversity culture.For example, the tradisonal dance, music, art, and also food. Each region in Indonesia has their own culture, so it makes Indonesia rich of culture.Indonesia's tradisional dance is Remo, Pendet, Saman, and etc. Indonesia's tradisonal food is Pempek, Rendang, Pecel, and etc. Not only about the culture, you can also visit to the heritage place like Prambanan and Borobudur temple in Java.There are more fascinating culture that you can explore. Third, Indonesians people are friendly, so the foreigner will feel welcome. The hospitality facilities, such as hotel, restaurant, cafe and club are good. The tourism can refresh with spa, massage, and etc. The peaceful situation also support the relaxation. Indonesia is an awesome country to visit because of the beautiful nature, culture, and friendly people.
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Elyas Bueraheng
BalasHapus20141111041
Topic sentence: My second country beloved indonesia.
Indonesia is a great country to visit for several season.
Reason A: The country is full of beautiful islands.
Example: Madura Java Bali
Reason B : History building
Examaple : Borobudur temple in Yogyakarta
Reason C : The food
Example : Rawon Soto Ayam
My second country beloved indonesia
Good aftenoon everybody. Indonesia a great country to have place an exciting with three reason. The fist of all, Indonesia has many island, such as Madura Java Bali Papua Kalimatan and etc. You can injoy wherever you like, and then
you can choose it place you want injoy. The second reason, the historical building indonesia has many histories. The building Borobodur temple in yogyakarta, it is the one of lagest histories Budist temple in the world.
You can injoy, in there.The third reason food indonesia when you live in indonesia. You will get many food delicious strange. such as Soto Ayam Rawon.
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HapusIndonesia is amazing country to visit for several reasons.
BalasHapusReason A : shopping paradise
Example : tagheuer, piaged, and prada
Reason B :Culinary
Example : has a good taste
Reason C : The legend place
Example :borobudur
Reason D :unique culture
Example : Traditional dance
Concluding sentense: choose Indonesia for your vacation is one of good idea because indonesia is amazing country, so what do you waiting for? Let’s go on.
Amazing of country is Indonesia
Indonesia is amazing country that has many culture, custom and tradition. Many Kinds of reason like shopping paradise, culinary, legend place, and unique culture.first reason is If you vacation to Indoneia you will have paradise feel because Indonesia has many of shopping place, like malioboro, tanah abang , tagheuer, piaged, and prada. It is make you easy to get some souvenir for your family. Second culinary, Indonesia has many of food because Indonesia consist of many island so in other place you will meet other taste food also. Third the legend place, Indonesia has many history like borobudur, toba lake etc. The last unique culture Indonesian people famouse with there culture one of that is tradinional dance like traditional dance from bali (kecak dance), aceh(saman dance) and Lampung (kipas dance).so let’s go to Indonesia to prove all of them and let’s see the amazing county.
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BalasHapusTopic Sentence: Indonesia is a thousand faces country to visit for several reasons.
Reason A: Location
Example: Thousand Island
Reason B: Culture
Example: Many Cultures like Javanese, sundanese, etc.
Reason C: Nature
Example: Many natural resources like petroleum, tin, natural gas, etc.
Reason D: Tours Destination
Example: Many historical places like “lawang sewu/thousand door”
Reason E: Marine
Example: spot diving
Concluding sentence: For these five reasons, Indonesia is a thousand faces country to visit.
Paragraph
Indonesia is a thousand faces country to visit for five reasons. The first reason is location. As we know that Indonesia has various types of islands ranging from the smallest to largest, for example, there are five major islands in Indonesia namely: Kalimantan or Borneo, Sulawesi, Sumatra, Jawa, and Papua. Because of the diversity of the island Indonesia is also known as "thousand island country". The second reason is culture. Cultures that are in Indonesia is very diverse, ranging from Sabang to Merauke have differences cultural, as well as on the island of Java we have Javanese and sundanese. Although different cultures but we uphold the unity and integrity of the State republic of Indonesia. The third reason is nature. In Indonesia has many natural resources, like the oil from Indonesia exported to the United States. Indonesia's natural resources includes, petroleum, tin, natural gas, etc. The forth reason is the tours destination. Indonesia has many historical places, like "thousand temple / Prambanan temple" and "lawang sewu / thousand doors", both the building has a lot of history of the establishment until now. The last reason is marine. Sea in Indonesia have such incredible beauty of Raja Ampat and Bunaken coral reefs there are maintained because cultivated properly, so that it can become the location of diving which are give fun in deep of water. For these five reasons, Indonesia is a thousand faces country to visit.
Topic sentences : Indonesia is the source of all sources of culture that has many unique.
BalasHapusReason A : Many Places Hidden Waiting Explored
Example : Hinterlands with a lot of unique things. Such as papua, ntt, larantuka.
Reason B : Have characteristics and had a wide variety of dance worldwide
Example : A dance tradisional remo, kecak ,kuda lumping etc.
Reason C : The polite and a friendly of culture that is taught
Example : Such as culture jogja polite in manners
Reason D : Have many ethnic diversity in Indonesia
Example : Suku bajo, suku Madura, suku asmat,
Reason E : Many have exotic island
Example : Island rote, NTT, Karimun jawa, kangean, BALI, Lombok
Indonesia is the source of all sources of culture that has many unique. The first, Indonesia has many Waiting explored Many hidden place that made Indonesia known abroad because many beautiful destinations that have not been in explore, and it is an attractive destination because Indonesia has many beautiful places hidden of the island such as larantuka, ntt , Lombok, etc because Indonesia is a hidden paradise. the second reason has the characteristics and has a wide range of dance around the world for example ondel-ondel dance mask dance reog this is the main attraction of of foreign tourists to vacation in Indonesia because Indonesia have many traditional dances were outstanding and each region in the dance has social value alone this wealth of Indonesia has many traditional dance and we as Indonesian proud. The third reason Polite and friendly culture that taught yeah it makes Indonesian pride in the community friendly polite degan said this makes foreign turist home in Indonesia with friendliness culture. Having a lot of ethnic diversity in Indonesia is what makes Indonesia is filled with a culture of mutual respect for each other, respect for differences such as the Bajo ethnic tribes Madura, ethnic Betawi many of the foreign tour holidays in Indonesia wants to better understand the tribes in Indonesia to be education in understanding diverse cultures in Indonesia and the last reason You have to enjoy what you've created God in many places Indonesian island exotic island of Bali famous example with a charming beach surrounded by beautiful islands and many places anymore because Indonesia is the source of all sources that are unique to discover wonderful Indonesia I am proud to be a citizen of Indonesia that is filled with uniqueness
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BalasHapusIs Gadget harmful for toddler ?
BalasHapusIn my opinion, there are three reasons why Gadget is harmful for toddler. The first reason, Gadget is deeply affecting the social and personal skills of toddler. It is noticed that a toddler may be expert at texting but poor at real communication with someone face to face. I find a kid holding full grip on a computer game but not at any other outdoor game. This is really a considerable issue attached with the future security of toddler that is addict to Gadget.Second reason, toddler who spend long hours staring on screens usually complain less concentration on studies and missing out his essential sleep. It makes him angry, grumpy, aggressive and he don’t take notice of anything going on around him until they finish. Gadget is not only killing his social, personal and creative skill but also leaving negative impacts on his health and emotion which is also going to be attached with his favorite gadget and electronic only. Third reason, The excess use of gadget should be and can be controlled by parent. he should fix his hour for playing with gadget. Toddler require 10 hours of sleep that are favorable to his health. If he don’t get it, it is harmful to his physical and mental health. For these reasons, Gadget is not always good effect for toddler and for parent should adopt good strategies. It would not be a wrong strategy to ban gadget for young children.
Gadget is harmful for toddler
BalasHapusIn my view, a gadget is harmful for toddler. First of all, toddlers are still can’t see the different of good or bad thing in an application of a gadget. My mothet says, “They are still in underage, so they can’t know what bad thin in an application or negative effect for them. Second reasons are a gadget can change their personality, such as they can become selfish, less interaction to each other and be more emotional. Based on my experience, i have a little brother that using gadget in most of his time. He was more emotional if his parents ask him to stop using it and he wass less interaction too. He never care what happened in home . Third reason is a toddlers using a gagdet for long hours and can make them get the sore eyes because there’s radiation in a gadget. According to Nindi’s experience, she has a brother that very active to using gadget for long hours since four years old. He got sore eyes and use glasses because he got the radiation from a gadgetin five years old. For these reason i give my statement if a gadget is harmful for toddler .
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BalasHapusIs gadget harmful for toddler ?
In my opinion, gadget is very harmful for toddler. First of all, the toddler has passive attitude. It’s means that toddler to be lazy to do physical activitiest such as, playing puzzle, run, playing football and other. They only concentration with their gadget and also dificult to consentration in study. the example, if their parent guide to study, the toddler just moment to concentration in their course of study and move to their gadget. Even though to do physical activitiest is very important to help the growth process. A second reason, the toddler will be emotional. If the connection to be loading, the toddler can’t control their patience and they want to fast respon. It is from mam ame’s experience She told about her son, he always angry if the gadget connection is loading. It’s not good because can be bad habits for toddler and to be their habits in adult. A third reason, to be individual. The toddler doesn’t care with their friend although they playing in a same location if their friend borrow a toy, the toddler who use gadget doesn’t want to loan out their toy to other friend. or these three reasons, I believe that the gadget has much disanvantages and is very harmful for toddler growth.
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BalasHapusSID Number : 20141111103
Reason A: Indonesia is well known as the land where the people, nature, custom, and tradition are blended to be one unique culture
Example: Indonesia has many unique traditions coming from the elder generations are harmoniously connected with the great nature and environments such as sedekah bumi in Northern Java area, Rebo Wekasan Tradition in Gresik, Sosowangan, and Bapongka in South Sulawesi Province.
Reason B: Indonesia is well known as the land of hospitality and peaceful ambiences
Example: we are in Indonesia always welcoming all of our guests –which is someone who doesn’t stay in our house- very friendly and try to serve the guests wherever they come as the best as we can.
Reason C: If we look closer, Indonesia is the country which can combine ancient heritages and modernity well and serve it as one great combination
Example: in many places we can see the modern facilities covered by old style architectures such as restaurant based on Sundanese Culture and also many tourism places based on local wisdom in their ornaments.
Reason D: Many people say if Indonesia is one of the Shopping Paradises in Asia and consisted by the splendors inside.
Example: Visitors could find many qualified things in cheap prices and also the visitors could find many shopping centers in variant sizes in several big cities such as Tunjungan Plaza in Surabaya, Pondok Indah Mall in Jakarta, Panakkukang Mall in Makassar, Palembang Indah Mall in Palembang, Papua Trade Center in Jayapura, and many more.
Name : Darundiyo Pandupitoyo, S. Sos.
BalasHapusSID Number : 20141111103
Miraculous and Unforgettable Indonesia
Indonesia is a miraculous and unforgettable country to visit for several reasons. The first reason that is really attractive to be focused is, Indonesia well known as the land where the people, nature, custom, and tradition are blended to be one unique culture. Many visitors that come to Indonesia can easily find unique traditions gotten from the elder generations are harmoniously connected with the great nature and environments such as sedekah bumi in Northern Java area, Rebo Wekasan Tradition in Gresik, Sosowangan, and Bapongka in South Sulawesi Province. We can see if Indonesian people still hold the commitment to respect our mother earth, especially the environment around them. By respecting their tradition and the environment as one, they hope this universe can run in dynamic and balance. Respecting their environment, creating rituals routinely, and involving many people insides create a good combination to make great cultural traditions. The second reason is Indonesia is well known as the land of hospitality and peaceful ambiences. In many places which lived by local people, Indonesia always offers you the best service and the greatest thing that you haven’t found before. We always put smile and hospitality in our face along with peaceful environment around, in order to make the guests/ the visitors smile and satisfy. The third reason is the favorite thing for the anthropologist, in Indonesia we can see clearly if this is the country which can combine ancient heritages and modernity well and serve it as one great combination. The visitors can find the modern facilities covered by old style architectures such as restaurant based on Sundanese Culture and also many tourism places based on local wisdom in their ornaments. Moreover, lots of Indonesian people still keeping the ancient heritages such as the traditional songs, traditional dresses, or traditional games and fortunately they can combine those elements as cultural acculturations which make new kinds of cultural products such as campur sari, kebaya-modern, etc. The forth and also the last reason is many people say if Indonesia is one of the Shopping Paradises in Asia and consisted by the splendors inside. Unlike Singapore that very offers you many qualified products in the expensive prices, Indonesia sets the visitors can find many qualified things in cheap prices and also the visitors could find many shopping centers in variant sizes and variant splendors in several big cities such as Tunjungan Plaza in Surabaya, Pondok Indah Mall in Jakarta, Panakkukang Mall in Makassar, Palembang Indah Mall in Palembang, Papua Trade Center in Jayapura, and many more. Those four factors that the writer have explained above, serve a little description of several things that make Indonesia being unforgettable in people’s mind who have been visited before. Indeed, Indonesia is the country who is surely miraculous and unforgettable country to visit by everyone all over the world.
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Gadget is harmful for toddler.
BalasHapusIn my opinion, gadget is harmful for toddler of several reasons. Firstly, Computer and gadget are addictive. Games, texting and frivolous online videos are especially so. It's also likely that the earlier kids start, the stronger their lifelong addiction. According to my aunt’s experience, her son always using gadget most of his time, then if his mother didn’t give him a gadget he become angry and didn’t want to eat. Secondly, gadget can make distracters for toddler. My neighbor says, “Everyday my son can’t leave his gadget ,This makes it difficult for kids to focus on other things. Homework, for example, Dinnertime conversations. Distraction mode quickly becomes a habit so strongly ingrained that some kids simply cannot break it. Thirdly, gadget can disrupted sleep. Based on my experience, I have little cousin when her mother go to the office my mother take care him until her mother go home, I ever give him a Smartphone , then he looking intently at bright screens before going to bed disrupts the quality of sleep. Bad sleep contributes to poor grades, behavior problems and a wide variety of health issues. For these several reason I think that gadget is really harmful for toddler.
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BalasHapusName : Teddy Handoko
BalasHapusSID : 20141111014
Topic Sentence: Indonesia is a picturesque country to visit for several reasons.
Reason A : every tourist will find a place like paradise in Indonesia.
Example : every tourist can easily choose, start diving with a thousand of beautiful sea or take a walk at the beach and the big cities, up to climbing hundreds of mountain greatness.
Reason B : Indonesia has many unique cultures.
Example : Indonesia has many unique local languages, clothes, dances and even traditional arms for each region.
Reason C : many fantastic events that can be enjoyed.
Example : the annual traditional event such as Tabuik in west Sumatra, Kebo-Keboan in Banyuwangi or international events as well as Sabang Marine festival in Weh island or Eclipse Festival in central Sulawesi and many more.
Reason D : visitors will greet with hospitality and peaceful ambience.
Example : nice smile and greeting will appear for visitors coming, so it would be more helpful for newcomers.
Reason E : lots of choices, easy to get and inexpensive art and craft make Indonesia into the best shopping paradise.
Example : they can obtain exquisite wood carving, woven bamboo or batik fabric and much more not to mention there is also a lot of branded things in shopping malls.
Concluding Sentences: From those five points above which always been looking for by tourist, Indonesia will become the first choice to be visited by tourist.
Indonesia The land of Gods and Goddesses.
Indonesia is a picturesque country to visit for several reasons. The first reason is because every tourist will find many places like paradise in Indonesia easily, start from paradise under the sea, Indonesia has Raja Ampat as the best place in the world to explore with diving, or snorkelling in Gili Nanggu Lombok, moreover it has resorts which are located above the sea. For those who like sunbathing or surfing, there are many choices of white sandy beaches such as Green Bowl in Kuta Bali or enjoy the volcano flute of the oceans south of Java on Klayar Beach Pacitan. For climbers, Jayawijaya, Gede mountain and many more will always become a challenge. The second reason is Indonesia has many unique cultures of each region, for example, it has more than five hundred regional language and many kinds of traditional clothing, dances and even a custom weapon. If they visit south Kalimantan Bujak Beliung recommended as a unique traditional arms gift or Pasatimpo centre Sulawesi traditional arms. The third reason is many fantastic events that can be enjoyed. Many annual traditional events such as Tabuik, Kebo-Keboan and international festival at all times entertain and impress all tourists. The fourth reason, hospitality greeting from Indonesian and peaceful ambience will enjoyed by them when set foot for the first time. For example, they will get easily information about anything from native inhabitants. So they could emerge their self in our fabulous culture. Last but not least and this is for the fifth reason, Indonesia is the best shopping paradise because they will very easily get an original art and craft from Indonesia with inexpensive price. If they require to buy daily needs or stuffs during their vacation the nearest shopping malls in every city provide an assortment of branded stuff. From those five points above which always been looking for by tourist, Indonesia will become the first choice to be visited by tourist. Indeed, Indonesia is a picturesque place to get vacation for them who like going outdoors or enjoying the peaceful ambience.
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BalasHapusName : Ramizah Rizqiya
BalasHapusNIM : 20141111115
The heaven in the world, called Indonesia.
Indonesia is an amazing place to spend a vacation for several reasons. First of all, Indonesia is the largest archipelago in the world. For example, has 13.487 islands the visitors need 37 years to get around Indonesia if staying for one day on each island. Then, Indonesia still has about 6,000 uninhabited islands.That's what makes Indonesia is the largest archipelago in the world. Second, Indonesia is rich in a variety of art and culture Reog Ponorogo dances from Indonesia and Tempeh is a traditional Indonesian food. Although Reog Ponorogo dances and Tempeh claimed to the neighbor country a few years ago, but Indonesia can reclaim ownership rights of both. Third, Indonesia has an amazing biodiversity. For example, Komodo is found in Indonesia is the world's largest lizard, and The world's largest flower, Rafflesia Arnoldi, the weighs 7 kg (15 pounds) and only grows on the island of Sumatra, Indonesia. Fourth, Indonesia is the paredise of sea lovers. For example, Indonesia is a vast archipelago country and many save natural resources with vast sea of nearly 70% of the total area of Indonesia, and Indonesian sea area reached 3,544,743.9 km², and supported by a rich biodiversity of coral reefs and mangroves are barns national fish that can be accounted for about 57-60% of animal protein intake source for the people of Indonesia. The last reason is Indonesia is a country that respects the differences. For example, Indonesia has 316 ethnic groups with 670 languages spoken, but Indonesia still using the first language of the country namely Indonesian. The visitors can gain a lot of knowledge only from a country, exactly the state of Indonesia.
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Name : Dhiah Nur Syafitry
BalasHapusNIM: 20141111110
INDONESIA NEVER BE UNFORGOTABLE ONE
Hello friend be happy and rightfully proud become Indonesian people because Indonesia has more and much hidden must you know. Because I can’t bear it for telling you about my Indonesia. Now, I would like to tell you 5 Reasons why Indonesia never becomes unforgettable place. First of all, Indonesia has a variety of languages , traditions, food. For example, in Sumatra, they aren’t used one language only but also many of them (Aceh, Alas, Angkola, Batak, Enggano and etc ). tradition in Sulawesi, Bali and Sumatra are also different , Mappasilaga Tedong or buffalo race in North Toraja , South Sulawesi , pitting buffalo become a tradition at the ceremony Funeral Signs Solo and rock jumping tradition in Nias , which is a sign they are adults or not or recognition maturity. Such as custom and culture in Bali Ngaben (Bali) this activity is burning ceremony or cremation of Hindus in Bali. To carry out the cremation ceremony, the family of the bodies will make "Bade and calves" to place the bodies that will be taken. The place is made of wood with a model that is very stately, aided by the surrounding community. Then, the body was in the wine, and the latter was burned along with the venue, in a solemn ritual .the unique food from Sumatra which I found is Ampiang Dadiah. Ampiang Dadiah made from buffalo milk that is given the acid of lemon. This sort of yogurt and eaten with Ampiang like cereals and sugar were red. So, a kind of eating yogurt, but this style of West Sumatra
Second, Indonesia has beautiful nature that is still awake in and it has birds paradise which no country has them such as raja ampat island and some of birds paradise that you can find in Papua it is flabbergast them to come to Indonesia . After that Indonesian people are good at combining some tourism places with nature such as golf with nature around the golf area. It addicted them to enjoy it every time without a sense of boredom. Then, Indonesia has a support for athletes or sportsmen who like a challenging sport .it recommended for all tourists to visit Bunaken for enjoying undersea beauty scenery while diving. And the last, visit Indonesia do not spend a lot of budge. Of course, is needed by every traveller when they want to enjoy their holiday in some places .they always want inexpensive place but high quality and as they want. And Indonesia is the choice of that cause the cost of dollar Indonesia is lower than other countries.
My Indonesia is Fatherland……..Take care and take care always
That's where I was born and raised. Therein I close my eyes
Oh dear ..... my homeland. Indonesia prosperous .....
Though I'll not always be in Indonesia but Indonesia has always been my blood and never always be forgotten.
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HapusName: Susi Ambarwati
BalasHapusSID Number: 20141111113
The Beauty of indonesia
Topic Sentence: Indonesia is a beautiful country to visit for several reasons.
Reason A: The Unique Culture and Tradition
Example: Traditional Dance Reog Ponorogo, Wayang Performance, Batik.
Reason B: The People
Example: Warm and Friendly
Reason C: The Historical Building
Example: Candi Borobudur, Candi Prambanan , Tugu Monas
Reason D: The beaches
Example: Kuta Beach in Bali, Gili Island’s Beach, Kolbano Beach.
Reason E: The underwater life
Example: Bunaken Island, Raja Ampat.
Concluding sentence: For these five reasons, Indonesia is a magnificent country to spend your vacation for a wonderful and unforgettable experience.
Name: Susi Ambarwati
BalasHapusSiD Number: 20141111113
The Beauty of Indonesia
Indonesia is a beautiful country to visit for several reasons. The first reason is the culture and tradition. Indonesia has unique culture and tradition, such as make batik, traditional dance, wayang and etc. Traditional dance Reog Ponorogo is one of the cultural arts from Eastern Java, from the district Ponorogo. Reog is one of local cultures in Indonesia which still believes in the mystical. The other is wayang. Wayang is a Javanese word for a theatrical performance with puppets or human dancers. Performance of shadow puppet theatre is accompanied by a gamelan orchestra in Java. Another one is traditional fabric of Indonesia, batik. Batik is created by ‘printing’ patterns on cloth with wax and dye. The Indonesian Batik patterns are considered symbolic, with various patterns holding different meanings. The Sido Mukti pattern is worn by a pair of bride and groom to symbolize prosperity and happiness, while the Kawung pattern is worn by the royalties to symbolize justice and power. The second reason is Indonesian people. Indonesians are generally known to be friendly, smiley, welcoming and always ready to lend a helping hand. When you travel to Indonesia you will be met with some of the biggest smiles you have ever seen. They are also very proud of their history, culture, wildlife, food, and always passionate about sharing it with others. Meet up with Indonesian people will make you feel warm, once you step in to our country. The third reason is the historical building. For example, Borobudur is the largest Buddhist temple in the world. Borobudur temple is located in Yogyakarta. After that, still in Central Java, there is Prambanan temple. It is one of the largest Hindu temple sites in South East Asia, and the largest in Indonesia. The other one is Tugu Monas. The national monument is also the icon of Indonesia’s capital, Jakarta. Tugu Monas is 132 meters tall, with a crown of flames made of gold at the very top. Tugu Monas was built to commemorate the struggle of Indonesians to achieve independence. The Fourth reason is the beaches. Indonesia has beautiful beaches, such as Kuta Beach, Gili Island’s beach and Kolbano beach. Kuta Beach is Bali's most famous beach resort destination. Kuta beach is also known as Sunset Beach. You can see beautiful sunsets in there. Luxury resorts, restaurants, and clubs are located along the beach. The other one is Gili Island’s Beach. The beaches of Gili Island are still powdery white, the water is beautiful clear blue and they are positioned perfectly for sunsets over Bali’s Mt Agung and sunrise over Lombok’s Mt Rinjani. Another one is Kolbano Beach. It is a unique beach in East Nusa Tenggara. The feature of the beach is different than other beach. Usually, a beach has white or black sand. But, when you come to Kolbano, you will find pebbles. The size and color of the pebbles are various. The fifth reason is the underwater life. If you prefer have great experience underwater, then Indonesia is a great place to visit. For example, the island of Bunaken is rated in the top of best diving destinations on the earth. You can swim with dolphins, giant turtles and other colorful coral-reef fishes. Bunaken Island is located in Manado. Another one is Raja Ampat. If you are in search of a quiet getaway in an idyllic land with untouched natural beauty, Raja Ampat is just the place for you. An archipelago located in Indonesia’s West Papua. Raja Ampat is a dream destination for many diving enthusiasts. The vast diversity of marine life and pristine coral reefs promises the ultimate underwater experience. For these five reasons, Indonesia is a magnificent country to spend your vacation for a wonderful and unforgettable experience.
Name : Dewi Istiqomah
BalasHapusSID Number : 20141111105
THE AMAZING OF INDONESIA
Topic Sentence : Indonesia is one of the most amazing country to visit for several reasons
Reason A :Indonesia has so many ethnics in each island
Example : java, sunda, batak, dayak etc
Reason B : Indonesia is rich in culture
Example : Traditional dance, wayang, beauty spa, traditional ritual, batik etc
Reason C : Indonesia are warm people
Example : every people will smile and give some greeting each other
Reason D : Indonesia has a lot of famous traditional food
Example : Rendang, padang food, pecel, etc
Reason E : Indonesia has many tourism place
Example : beach, kawah ijen, Borobudur, Raja Ampat, bromo, shoping paradise
Concluding Sentence: for these five reasons Indonesia is the wonderful country for enjoying your vocation.
Name :Dewi Istiqomah
BalasHapusSID Number : 20141111105
THE AMAZING OF INDONESIA
Indonesia is one of the most amazing country to visit for several reasons. The first reason is Indonesia is a huge island archipelago with 18,307 islands. Indonesia has so many ethnics in each island. There are lot of different people and dialect from sabang until merauke and also different race, different typical of myth belief. Forexample java, sunda, batak, dayak, bugis etc. beside of that there are 5 religion in Indonesia such as islam, catholic, christian, Buddha, hindu. Although they are different but they always respect each other and become one unity Indonesia. The second reason is Indonesia is rich in culture. Forexample batik, wayang, reog, beauty spa etc. Batik is both an art and a craft, which is becoming more popular and well known in the West as a wonderfully creative medium. The art of decorating cloth in this way, using wax and dye, has been practised for centuries. then wayang is an Indonesian word for theater. Bayang, the Javanese word for shadow or imagination, also connotes "spirit." Moreover Reog is one of the cultural arts from Eastern Java. The city gate was decorated by the figure of Ponorogo Warok and Gemblak, two figures who have appeared when Reog is performed. Reog is one of local cultures in Indonesia which still believes in the mystical. The third reason is Indonesians are warm people. They are very friendly and welcoming people. Forexample In the majority of the places you travel to throughout the country, you will be met with some of the biggest smiles you have ever seen. They are also very proud of their history, culture, wildlife, food and more, and are passionate about sharing it with others. The fourth reason is Indonesia has a lot of delicious traditional food and beverages. Forexample you can literally eat for days in Indonesia and always be trying something new. Some popular Indonesian foods are Rendang, pecel, satay (like lamb or chicken skewers), nasi goreng (a fried rice plate with other foods added to it like fried eggs, vegetables, and chicken), gudeg (a dish made from boiled young jackfruit, often served with rice, sambal sauce and chicken) and my favorite, sambal sauce - a spicy sauce that can be added rice and many other dishes. Indonesia is also one of the largest coffee producers in the world - the phrase “a cup of Java” actually comes from Indonesia’s island of the same name, where the coffee comes from. They are also famous for Kopi Luwak, which is coffee made from the poop of the Luwak - aka civet cat - that has eaten coffee beans and pooped them out. Sounds gross but it is actually rare and quite expensive coffee. The fifth reason is Indonesia has so many wonderful tourism place. Forexample Borobudur is the largest Buddhist temple in the world and is found in Java, Indonesia. Made up of 2,000+ relief panels and over 500 Buddha statues, this temple is an amazing monument to see. Also there are many beach. One of them is kuta beach in bali. Some of the best surfing beaches in the world can be found on the western side of the island whilst conversely the eastern side is a wonderful haven for families, with beautiful white sand beaches and gentle seas. Also any raja ampat underwater paradise. Raja Ampat is all about diversity – not only diversity of species, but also of dive sites. There are some areas where soft corals and sea fans dominate, others with amazing diverse hard corals, seagrass beds, mangroves, shallow reefs, drop offs, caves, black sand, white sand, then there are fish, lots of them, in more shapes and sizes than anywhere else in the world. Indonesia also has paradise shoping such as gajah mada plaza, bali galleria mall, plaza mall etc. for these five reasons Indonesia is the wonderful country for enjoying your vocation.
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The Wonderful of Indonesia
Topic Setence : Indonesia is beautiful country to visit for several reason.
Reason A : Majestic natural beauty
Example : Kuta beach, Raja ampat island, Bromo mountine
Reason B : Unique culture
Wayang, batik, kind of traditional dress and house
Reason C : Unique traditional custom
Rambu solo in toraja, Karapan sapi in madura,
Example : Kind of dance,kind of traditional dress, kind of house custom
Reason D : Many historical building
Example : Borobudur temple, katedral church
Reason E : Delicious foods
Example : Sate, tempe.
Concluding sentence : For these fifth reasons, indonesia is a beuatiful country
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The Wonderful of Indonesia
Indonesia is beautiful country to visit for several reasons. The first reason is majestic natural beauty, many places can be visited and make the visitor amazed and can’t forget it, so they want to come back again. Beaches, islands and montains in indonesia are couse their, because it is one of most beautiful in the world, such as kuta beach in bali, this beach is always crowded. Many tourism for domestic or foreign, kuta beach is famous and beautiful in sunrise, white sands, and panorama near it, many tourist sunbathe and surf in there. Raja ampat island in west papua, it is wonderful under see panorama. Bromo montain in east java, it is interesting montain because it is very natural and the status of montain still active.The second reason is unique culture. Indonesia is country have many culture until now generation still can see and enjoyed. Such as wayang, batik, kind of traditional dress, kind of house custom, ect. They arel always full of art so the young generation very rightfully proud when wear or used it. The third reason is unique traditional custom, indonesia has many people so many customs traditional untill now still be care althought in the era moden because indonesia people who very love with their traditional custom. Such as rambu solo in toraja, it is ritual for honor the dead, the remains will put on the cliff cave, and the remains maked dol from wood and the face like the remains. The other example is karapan sapi from madura, east java. It is racing by cow. The Fourth is many historical building, such as one of historical building wonder of the world is borobudur temple, katedral church in jakarta. The first church building in jakarta when dutch of colonialization. The fifth reason is delicious foods. Such as sate and tempe is an original from indonesia, so if get it in other country the teste will not as good as in indonesia. All in all, from these five reasons Indonesia is so beuatiful country.
Name : Ria Novia
BalasHapusNIM : 20141111111
The Reasons Why Tourists Must Visit Indonesia?
First reason: The beauty of tourism places
Example 1: Wonderful undersea panorama
Example 2: Beaches
Example 3: Amazing mountains panorama
Second reason: Uniqueness and differences cultural background
Example 1: People (The kindness of people)
Example 2: Language and Art
Third reason: Home stays and hotels
Example 1: Good view and comfortable
Example 2: Exclusive hotels
Fourth reason: Food
Example 1: Delicious
Example 2: Easy to get but it is not expensive
Fifth reason: Shopping Paradise
Example 1: Exclusive mall
Example 2: Traditional market
The Reasons Why Tourists Must Visit Indonesia?
Indonesia is an amazing paradise on the earth that tourists must visit for several reasons. The first reason is the beauty of the tourism places where are served in every island of Indonesia. The tourists can enjoy and see the panorama naturally. For example, in Raja Ampat Papua, they can see a wonderful undersea panorama where has the most beautiful undersea panorama in the world. In Raja Ampat the tourists can explore the undersea panorama by diving or just only snorkeling. The atmosphere in Raja Ampat is still pure and natural where it can help the tourists to refresh their mind from the business of theirs life. For instance, the beauty of beaches is one of Indonesia’s beauties that are so beautiful and amazing. By enjoying one of beaches in Indonesia, it can make the tourists feel so comfortable because of the wonderful condition in the beach. Most of tourists say that the beaches in Indonesia can make them fall in love in the first sees. That is not ending; Indonesia also has an amazing mountains panorama. Let us take several examples; the most beautiful mountain panorama is in East Java. In east java Indonesia two mountains where are so beautiful, yeah… Bromo and Mahameru Mountains the name is. In Bromo the tourists can see the beauty of sunrise from the peak of mountain. And in Mahameru the tourist can enjoy a beautiful lake and mountain range. The most amazing view that tourists will taste is when they are in the peak of mountain they are as like as standing above the clouds. The second reason is the uniqueness and differences cultural background. For example, Indonesia has thousand of islands where makes Indonesia has different language and art. In every different island, Indonesia has different cultural background that the tourists never seen before. But do not worries Indonesians are so humble and friendly to everyone who comes in Indonesia. About art, Indonesia has beautiful dances which are known in every single country of the world. The third reason is homes stay and hotels. The tourist can stay at exclusive hotels where serve comfortable rooms and view such as in Bali. Most of hotels in Bali faces the beautiful beaches where can make the tourists feel comfort by cheap price, of course. The forth reason is food. Staying in different country sometime is not easy to find the food which is suitable for the tourist’s tongue, but in Indonesia the tourists can find delicious food easily and they can pay by low price because Indonesia is also paradise of culinary. The fifth reason is shopping paradise. Spending the vacation sometimes is not only about how to enjoy the trip but also how to get something unique from the places that we visit for souvenir. In Indonesia, the tourists can shop everything because Indonesia is one of shopping paradise place where indulging of them. If the tourists like shopping in modern places, Indonesia has so many exclusive mall that tourists can visit easily, but if the tourists like shopping something which is unique and cheap, Indonesia has a unique place that called traditional market where served everything by low price with high quality. All in all, Indonesia is one of an amazing, a wonderful and great paradise on the earth that tourists must visit.