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Gadget is Harmful for Toddlers
BalasHapusI believe that gadget is harmful for toddlers. First of all, gadget make toddlers emotional. As mam ame said that her son become quick tempered if his gadget is trouble. By using gadget, toddlers being emotional because familiar interaction with the gadget and make them addicted of it. A second reason that gadget is harmful for toddlers is that makes them more lazy. By using gadget to much cause toddlers have a bad habit like spent all of the time to play gadget and made a virtual world by them own. They will forget about their obligation in the real world and also give bad impact in their life. A third reason that gadget is harmful for toddlers is make them more sensitive with society. Toddlers that had bad habit by using gadget to much have troubled with the other person because they used to playing gadget by them self. That also change their psychology and their mindset to know and interaction in public. For the result of the research, toddlers that used to play gadget have responsibility in their sphere of life only 45% and can be sensitive in their personality from society. From these three reasons, I believe that gadget is harmful for toddlers and should be controlled or even better banned.
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HapusSDs: 2.5
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Name : Nila Rachmania Devi
BalasHapusStudent Number : 2014 1111 021
Topic :Is gadget harmful for toddler ?
The harmful of gadget for toddler
I think gadget is harmful for toddler. First of all, gadget can make toddler less sensitive to the society and disrupt their skill development. Toddler will difficult in forming normal social relationship and having activities with their friends. According to an article published in The New York Times, Dr. Gary Small, author of “iBrain : Surviving the Technological Alteration of the Modern Mind” and director in the Longevity Center at the University of California says that if children spend too much time on technology and less time with people, it hinders interaction and disrupts the normal communication skill development on children. Toddler can copy and inherit skill of talking from gadget but fail when socializing with their friends. A second reason that gadget is harmful for toddler is that they make toddler forget about the time and their real world. Research by the Kaiser Family Foundation estimates that children are spending seven and a half hours staring at a screen. Toddler spent more time to play with gadget than play with their friends, because toddler can easily play their gadget on their own. They will also have their own world that actually is not real. If it is continued, it will be harmful for toddler and they become addiction to gadget. Third, toddler will get health problem because of gadget. They will get obesity because they are not burning their calories by playing with their friends. They only stay at home and play their gadget. Not only obesity they will get eyesight problem, radiation exposure. Dr. Anthony Miller from the University of Toronto’s School of Public Health revealed that radio frequency exposure is clearly a threat to children. Toddler who are addict to play with gadget are more likely to develop eye problems as they grow. Besides that, toddler will get sleep deprivation and tantrums. Toddler who get addicted to playing on their gadget miss out on the needed rest. On other hand, playing on their gadget become their sleeping pill. Without it, they become easily angry and aggressive. They are throwing a tantrum when their gadget are taken away from them. Mam Armeria who is parents that have a toddler said that her kid will throwing a tantrum if the connection data on gadget is not working or if the gadget is taken away. For these three reason, I think gadget is harmful, because gadget will make toddler less sensitive, forget about the time, and get health problem. So, parents must think first if they want to give gadget to their toddler and for parents that their toddler have already used gadget, they must control and care to their toddler.
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The Harmful of Gadget For Toddler
BalasHapusIn my view, gadget is harmful for toddler. First of all, gadget can cause many health issues for toddler. According to some surveys that conducted from time to time tell that due to increasing use of gadgets, toddler are suffering from the health problem like back pain, weak eyesight, etc. Second, it could make the toddler addicted to their gadget. Base on a british survey, children under 12 age love electronic gadget and they are addicted to it. They may spending 7 to 10 hours of the day with their gadget no matter it is computer, mobile, video game, and any other technology toys. Third, gadget can affect toddler’s ability to control their emotion. The emotional development of many children is being stunted by the excessive use of mobile technology. Base on the Child psychologist at Boston University school of medicine in the US found that children who heavily used devices were unable to control their emotion. And also according to Dr. Jenny Radesky, a clinical instructor in developmental-behavioural paediatrics at the university, said, “It has been well-studied that gadget decreases a child’s development of language and social skill. Mobile media use similary replaces the amount of time spent engaging in direct human to human interaction”. for these three reasons, I believe that gadget is harmful for toddler, so that’s why the parents should keep the toddler away from gadget.
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HapusSDs: 4
CS: 2.8
Name : Shinta Desmalasari
BalasHapusNIM : 20141111043
Is Gadget Harmful for Toddler ?
In my opinion, I disagree if gadget bring harmful for toddler. First of all, playing gadget make toddler have more knowledge. Toddler can learn to calculate and read by using gadget. Toddler is golden age where they can catch anything that they see and listen. So, the toddler can get new vocabulary for playing gadget. So that they can express their mind. Asecon reason that gadget is good for toddler is that hey can show their skill. Gadget has aplication that can operate by theirshelf,for example, games or education aplication. Toddler will operate the aplication without ask to their parents, but they will try it by theirshelf and it’s good for their mind and skill to know how to operate it. Maybe parents can’t see what the skill that their child has, but without parents know with playing gadget their child can explore the skill with using the aplication. A third reason that gadget is good for toddler is that using gadget can help the toddler how to war communicate.now, available aplication “Talking Tom” where toddler can say anything and he tom will repeat it, with the aplication toddler can talk active and make them more confident to talk with other person. For these three reason, I believe that gadget has good effect for toddler.
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HapusSDs: 2.5
CS: 2.9
Name : Maziyatul Minnah Nissa
BalasHapusNIM : 20141111031
Gadget is Harmful for Toddler
In my opinion, gadget is harmful for toddler. First of all, toddler will be emotional if the gadget connection is lost, because usually when the toddler was playing with the gadget they would forget everything. The gadget has an exciting game applications until toddler get addicted in the gadget applications. One way to reduce it can turning off internet connection so that the toddler can stop play gadget, but it does not make toddler to reduce gadget and the toddler will be emotional because gadget that they have play is lost. A second reason, gadget is harmful for toddler. The toddler cannot focus because their can reduce the ability and they can maybe difficult to understand something new, usually the brain to toddler is still too fast to absorb something new they identified. If the toddler often use the gadget will have a negative effect for toddler, usually gadget has sophisticated applications, for example camera,video,games and other applications. That all application can interfere learning process for toddler so toddler need guidance when they playing gadget. Third, the toddler gets less sleep because they can play gadget until midnight. Toddler whose obsession play games on the gadget they would forget what they should do, for example there is time to sleep but the toddler will not sleep until the game is finished, if the toddler like that so the parent must give warning. The warning that should be done by parent is the parent should take the gadget when toddler is sleep so toddler will not sleep until midnight. For these three reasons, I believe that gadget has many negative effect for toddler.
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HapusSDs: 3
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BalasHapusPandu Suyekti Syamsu
BalasHapus20141111015
The Gadget’s Harmful for Toddler
In my opinion, gadget is harmful for toddlers. First of all, it can cause toddlers’ health troubled. According for surveys which I search in internet, it can cause dangerous effect in their eyes if they often use it. They can be exposed farsightedness or nearsightedness in their young age. The second reason why gadget is harmful for toddlers is that it makes their concentration reduced. Dr. Seto Mulyadi, Psi M. Psi, said that a habit of toddlers that uses gadget will break ability to concentrate. Their concentration becomes shorter, and they won’t become to care with their neighborhood. The last, it can cause them to be lazy. In one of blogs which I find google, they will become lazy to read and write because there are interesting pictures that are very indeed, so that they will choose gadget more than others. It can affect their reading and writing skills not to evolve. For these three reasons, I think that gadget is harmful for toddlers, so the parents have to be more careful to choose a thing that will be educated for their children.
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HapusSDs:2.5
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NAME : RITA NURHALIMAH
BalasHapusNIM : 20141111011
Is Gadget Harmful for Toddler?
Topic sentence : I believe that gadget is harmful for toddler.
First reason : Using a gadget can bring on changes in the behavior of toddler.
Detail : 1. It will lead to withdrawal symptoms.
2. It will bring on an argumentative behavior.
Second reason : Gadget addiction in toddler.
Detail : 1. Lack of interest in other activities.
2. Being an interpersonal person.
Third reasons : Decreasing of health.
Detail : 1. Decrease the function of eyes.
2. It will bring radiation.
Concluding sentence : For those reasons, I totally agree that gadget is harmful for toddler.
Is Gadget Harmful for Toddler?
I believe that gadget is harmful for toddler. Parents are suggested to don’t give a chance for toddler for using a gadget instead of a friend. There several reasons why gadget is being harmful for toddler. First of all, using a gadget can bring on changes in the behavior of toddler. According to Dr. Graham, if the toddlers appear tense or upset when they can not get online, and this feeling noticeably goes away when they are given their gadget. It means that there is withdrawal symptoms of toddlers by giving a gadget. They also being more sensitive and often argue with their parents if not given a gadget. A second reason that toddler addicted to gadget may also lack of interest in other activities, and refuse to go to places where their gadget can not be used, such as the museum or amusement park. Another one is leads to be an interpersonal person. The toddler who spend a whole day on playing a gadget will ignore the people in their surrounding and just focus on a gadget. If this case is happened, it will bring the negative impact for them when growing up. Doing everything with partner is little difficult for them because they used to do anything by themselves and just focus on one thing. A third reason that giving a gadget to toddler will lead to decreasing of health. Increasing the number of hours they spend every day looking at the screen of gadget will bring on decreasing the function of eyes. Parents must realize about this case by avoiding their toddler from a gadget from now. Furthermore, it will bring radiation for toddler by using a gadget. Prof. Nesrin Seyhan, whose studies repeatedly show that prenatally, exposed rats and rabbits have fewer brain cells. His studies also show those that survive sustain more damage to their brain, liver, reproductive system, and eyes. Other research carried out by the dozen laboratories collaborative of the European Union Reflex project found that exposures to gadget radiation directly impaired human brain cells. If the parents do not think about this matter, it will be happened to their toddler. For those reasons, I strongly agree that a gadget is harmful for toddler. That’s why I reaffirm that parents must more concern as to their toddler by not giving a gadget instead of a friend in order to avoid the negative impacts for them.
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HapusSDs: 3
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Name:Sitti Nurhayati Lolon
BalasHapusNim:20141111019
Is Gadget Harmful For Toddler?
Topic sentence:In may opinion , gadgets are harmful for toddler
First reason:Gadget is deeply affecting the social and personal of our kids
Possible detail:It is notice that toddler may be expert at texing but poor at real communication with someone face to face
Second reason: gadget make toddler less concentration
Possible detail:1. Toddler who spend long hours starting on the screen usually complain less concentration on studies and missing out their essential sleep.
2.Playing gadget leaving negative impact on their health and emotions which are also going to be attached with their favorite gadgets and electronics only.
Third reason: Gadget can cause heath problem for toddler
Possible detail:1. .Looking at screen is bad for eyes
2. Gadgets are also make radiation
Four reason: Gadget make lack of exercise and sunshine
Possible detail: According to a U.K Government , health warning kids are also growing weak
Concluding sentence: . For these reasons, I believe that gadget has many negative impacts for toddler.
Is Gadget Harmful For Toddler?
In may opinion , gadgets are harmful for toddler.First of all,gadget is deeply affecting the social and personal of our kids.It is notice that toddler may be expert at texing but poor at real communication with someone face to face.You may find a kid holding full grip on a handphone game but not at any other outdoor game.This reallya considerable issue attached with the future security of our kids that are addict to gadgets.A second reason that gadget make toddler less concentration.Toddler who spend long hours starting on the screen usually complain less concentration on studies and missing out their essential sleep.It make them peevish, grumpy,aggressive,and they do not takenotice of anything going around them until they finish.Gadgets are not only killing their social,personal,and creative skill but also leaving negative impact on their health and emotions which are also going to be attached with their favorite gadgets and electronics only.A third reason that gadget can cause heath problem for toddler.Looking at screen is bad for eyes, especially for developing every new device that comes along increases the number of hours children spend everyday looking at screens and decreases the time spent looking at objectof varying distance , which is necessary for good eyesight.Gadgets are also make radiation.The jury is still out on the whether cell phones cause cancer but if they do,there will be an epidemic.Kids are getting cell phones now before the age of ten and those phones are irradiating them all day and all night,all their lives.A fourth reason that gadget make lack of exercise and sunshine.According to a U.K Government , health warning kids are also growing weak.Some seventy percents of Americans suffer from fitamin D deficiency,which weaknes both muscle and bone and contributes to diabetes and obesity.A lack of exercise does the same thing.As a result of these deficiencies,combined with to much junk food, this generation of children may become the first history to actually die before their parents. For these reasons, I believe that gadget has many negative impacts for toddler.
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BalasHapusAbraham Dauddie P
BalasHapus20141111037
Gadget Is Harmful for Toddler
I have my own opinion that gadget is harmful for toddler. First, gadgets impact toddler’s lives negatively. It can cause change to toddler's behavior. It will make them more aggressive, careless, grumpy and they don't care of anything until they finish playing or using gadget. Steve Jobs, a founder of the most popular gadget “Apple” did not allow their toddler to spend much time with iPad. Job said that he sees the danger from gadget. Second, gadget is addictive for toddler. According to a British survey, toddlers love electronic gadget and they are addict to it. They may spending 7 to 10 hours of the day with their gadget. Experts have warned that parents who allow toddlers to access gadget for several hours a day are in danger of causing dangerous long term effects. The last, gadget can cause myopia. The gadgets will use the LED, light-emitting diode screens. The light will have a greater energy and it also has a smaller wavelength. As a result, these lights will cause a damage to the eye. This will end up affecting the eye retina. The more the toddler stares or uses the gadget, the more the retina is damaged. This can finally cause the myopia to the toddlers and if they use the phones even more, it can cause more problems. For those three reasons, I believe that gadget gives many negative effects to toddler.
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HapusSDs: 4.6
CS: 3
Name : Izar Aisy Syahdaniar
BalasHapusNim : 20141111047
Is Gadged Harmful For Toddler?
Topic Sentence: In my opinion, I believe that gadged harmful for toddler
First Reason: Using a gadged can bring on changes in the behavior for toddler
Detail :
1. It will less active play equals delayed development
2. It will be easy to emotional
Second Reason : Gadged addiction for toddler
Detail :
1. Being an interpersonal person
2. Lack of interest in other activities besides using gadged
Third Reason : Gadged have bad of health
Detail :
1. Decrease the function of eyes
2. It will bring gadged cause tantrums
Concluding sentences : For those reason, I agree that gadged is harmful for toddler
Is Gadged Harmful for Toddler?
I believe that gadged harmful for toddler. Parents are suggested don’t give a chance for toddler for using gadged instead of friend. There several reason why is gadged harmful for toddler. First of all, using a gadged can bring on changes in the behavior for toddler. Kids under the age of 12 spend more time in front of a screen rather than playing outdoors. This restriction in movement results in delayed development. According John Ratey, a doctor at Harvard, explained in his book, Spark: The Revolutionary New Science of Exercise and the Brain, that the advantages of playing are not limited to being physically fit and socially comfortable. Even 10 minutes of physical activity changes the way the brain functions. In addition, exercise normally makes people feel better because it “builds and conditions the brain.” They also being more sensitive emotional and often argument with their parents if not given a gadged. A second reason that toddler addiction to gadged may also being an interpersonal person. The toddler just focus on gadged. If the case is happened , it will be bring negative impact for them when growing up. Do everything with partner is little difficult for them because they used do anything themselves and just focus one thing. Another one is lack of interest in other activities besides using gadged and refuse to go places where their gadged can’t be used such as in the mountain or village. A third reason that gadged have bad of health for toddler. Increasing the number of hours they spend every day looking at the screen of gadged will bring decrease the function of eyes and such as toddler must wearing glasses with early age. Parents must give time limit to their toddler in order avoid radiation gadged from now. It will bring gadged cause tantrums. Do you know what an “iPaddy” means? It’s a term coined for kids throwing a tantrum when their electronic devices are taken away from them. A study commissioned by online retailer Pixmania revealed that eight out of 10 parents who have children ages 14 and under said they confiscate gadgets as a form of punishment. Because kids have grown attached to them, kids throw tantrums. If you don’t want to be like these parents, re-assess the extent you allow your kids to regularly use technology before they get too attached to them. There is no stopping the wave of technology. Parents cannot tell their kids to live without them because they will surely need it as they grow older. However, a parent must be aware of the advantages and disadvantages behind them. When supervised and regulated, gadgets can aid in development at the right age, but too much use of technology (and too early) will only delay a child’s learning abilities and put a strain on his psychological health. For those reason , I strongly agree that a gadged is harmful for toddler. Parents must more concern as to their toddler by giving a gadged instead of a friend in order to avoid the negative impact for them.
Devi al afrida
BalasHapus2014 1111 023
Topic : is gadged harmful for toddlers ?
Topic sentence : My opinion, gadged is really harmful for toddlers because many negatif thing of gadged for Children
First reason A. risk of addiction
Possible details : Research of rutgers university find that gadged can make children adddiction, they are will forgoten ate, played and to do other activity. Forget to eat can make disturbed health of children. Children that seldom or never play and do activity with other person will make child be lazy and non social.
Second reason B. the children will have gruff attitude.
Possible details : Many children use gadged just for playing game, and many game that teach about violence. This is make children easy to emotional, like when the game over.
Third reason C. gadged make lazy to writing and reading
Possible details : The child will choose gadged that more fun and attractive than book that the activity just for writing and reading.
Concluding sentence : For these reason, i suggest that don’t give gadged for children because many negative reason about gadged for children to todddlers.
Is gadged harmful for toddlers ?
My opinion, gadged is really harmful for toddlers because many negatif thing of gadged for Children
First of all, there risk of addiction. Research of rutgers university find that gadged can make children adddiction, they are will forgoten ate, played and to do other activity. Forget to eat can make disturbed health of children. Children that seldom or never play and do activity with other person will make child be lazy and non social. A second reason, the children will have gruff attitude. Many children use gadged just for playing game, and many game that teach about violence. This is make children easy to emotional, like when the game over. A thrid reason gadged make lazy to writing and reading. The child will choose gadged that more fun and attractive than book that the activity just for writing and reading. For these reason, i suggest that don’t give gadged for children because many negative reason about gadged for children to todddlers.
Is a gadget harmful for toddler ?
BalasHapusIn my view, a gadget is harmful for toddler. First of all, toddlers are still cant’s see the different of good or bad thing in each application of a gadget. My mother says “They are still in underage, so they can’t know what bad thing in an application or negative effect of using gadget for them”. Second reason is a gadget can change their personality, such as they can become selfish, less interaction to each other and be more emotional. Based on my experience, i have a little brother who using gadget in most of his time. He was more emotional if his parents ask him to stop use it and he less interaction too, like he never care what happen in home. Third reason is toddlers can get the sore eyes if they using gadget for long hours and become use the glasses. Based on Nindi’s experience, she has a little brother who using gadget for long time since he in four years old. He got sore eyes and and have to used glasses because he got the bad effect of gadget radiation in five years old. For these reasons, i believe if a gadget is harmful for toddlers.
FARAH DIAH ALFI
20141111039
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HapusSDs:2.8
Cs: 3
IZAR AISY SYAHDANIAR
BalasHapus20141111047
Is Gadgets Harmful For Toddler?
Topic Sentence : In my opinion, I believe that gadgets harmful for toddler
First Reason : Using a gadgets can bring change in the behavior for toddler
Detail : 1. It will less active play equals delayed development
2. It will be easy to emotional
Second Reason : The effect of modern day gadgets on toddler
Detail : 1. Delayed Physical Development
2. Imposes health risks
Third Reason : Kids spend many hours a day with gadgets
Detail :1. It will be less concentration
2. Being an interpersonal person
Concluding sentence : For those reason , I agree that gadgets is
harmful for toddler
Is Gadgets Harmful For Toddler?
I believe that gadgets harmful for toddler. There several reason why is gadgets harmful for toddler. First of all, using a gadgets can bring change in the behavior for toddler. Kids under the age of 12 spend more time in front of a screen rather than playing outdoors. This restriction in movement results in delayed development. According John Ratey, a doctor at Harvard, explained in his book, Spark: The Revolutionary New Science of Exercise and the Brain, that the advantages of playing are not limited to being physically fit and socially comfortable. Even 10 minutes of physical activity changes the way the brain functions. In addition, exercise normally makes people feel better because it “builds and conditions the brain.” They also being more sensitive emotional and often argument with their parents if not given a gadgets. A second reason that The effect of modern day gadgets on toddler may also being delayed physical development. Toddler should be strolling around in their walkers or playing with blocks or other toys instead of being glued to the TV or others gadgets. Lack of physical activity is bound result in delayed physical development and event childhood obesity, which is alarmingly on the increase from the amount spend on gadgets time. By giving your toddler an electronic gadgets to play with your exposing to them to a number of health risk. A strain on the eye , poor sitting posture and the exposure to electromagnetic radiation are just some of the health hazards out of innumerable others that could afflict your child from an early age. Third reason that kids spend many hours a day with gadgets. Children who spend long hours staring on screens usually complain less concentration on studies and missing out their essential sleep. Gadgets are not only killing their social, personal and creative skills but also leaving negative impacts on their health. Another reason that being an interpersonal person. According to a British survey, children from 9 to 12 of age love electronic gadget and they are addict to it. This addiction of gadgets is deeply affecting the social and personal skills of our kids. It is noticed that a youngster may be expert at texting but poor at real communication with someone face-to-face. You may find a kid holding full grip on a computer game but not at any other outdoor game. This is really a considerable issue attached with the future security of our young kids that are addicts to gadgets. For those reason, I strongly that gadgets harmful for toddler. Parents must more concern as to their toddler by giving a gadgets instead of a friend in order to avoid the negative impact for them.
Is Gadget Harmful for Toddler ?
BalasHapusIn my opinion, there are three reasons why Gadget is harmful for toddler. The first reason, Gadget is deeply affecting the social and personal skills of toddler. It is noticed that a toddler may be expert at texting but poor at real communication with someone face to face. I find a kid holding full grip on a computer game but not at any other outdoor game. This is really a considerable issue attached with the future security of toddler that is addict to Gadget.Second reason, toddler who spend long hours staring on screens usually complain less concentration on studies and missing out his essential sleep. It makes him angry, grumpy, aggressive and he don’t take notice of anything going on around him until they finish. Gadget is not only killing his social, personal and creative skill but also leaving negative impacts on his health and emotion which is also going to be attached with his favorite gadget and electronic only. Third reason, The excess use of gadget should be and can be controlled by parent. he should fix his hour for playing with gadget. Toddler require 10 hours of sleep that are favorable to his health. If he don’t get it, it is harmful to his physical and mental health. For these reasons, Gadget is not always good effect for toddler and for parent should adopt good strategies. It would not be a wrong strategy to ban gadget for young children.