In this final exam, you are about to write a 'stating reason' paragraph. 'Why Gadget is Harmful for Toddler' is the topic of your paragraph. Please have at least four reasons for the topic. Do not forget to write the outline first before you compose your paragraph. Post the outline and the paragraph writing in the comment box below along with your name and NIM. Final post must be on Sunday, January 10th, 2016 at 4.00 p.m.. Happy writing.
Name :M. Farhan
BalasHapusNIM :20141111102
Indonesia is Interesting Place to Have a Holiday
For several reasons:
Outline
Reason A : Beauty natural
Example : Beach
Example : Mountain
Reason B : Season
Example : Dry season
Example : Winter season
Reason C : Friendly
Example : Respectable
Example : Smile
Reason D : The various culinary
Example : Rendang
Example : Ayam bertutu
Reason E : Cost
Example : Car rental
Example : Life
Indonesia is Interesting Place to Have a Holiday
Indonesia is one of country having many interesting places to have a holiday. First, Indonesia has many beauty naturals. One of the beauty naturals of Indonesia are beaches and mountains. The tourists will feel at home when they enjoy the beauty of the beaches and mountains ornament. They can spend their holiday Indonesia by enjoying the various beaches and mountain are in Indonesia. Second, Indonesia has two season namely, dry and winter season. One of thing that they can’t find in their country is season. They will enjoy two seasons when they have a holiday in Indonesia. Third, most of Indonesia societies are friendly. The tourists having a holiday feel at home more and they can know more each other because of Indonesian respect and smile. Fourth, Indonesia has various foods. Almost all the districts of Indonesia have difference various foods. One of the famous Indonesia foods are rendang and ayam bertutu. Fifth, the cost is really affordable. If we compare with abroad, Indonesia has lower cost. For example, when they rent the car or hotel needn’t spend much money because the good price of Indonesia is cheap. That all the things make the tourist interest to have a holiday in Indonesia.
Name: Susi Ambarwati
BalasHapusNIM: 20141111113
Gadget is Harmful for Toddler
Topic sentence : In my opinion, gadget is harmful for toddler.
First reason : Gadget can cause many health issues in children.
Detail : 1.The use of gadget can cause damage eyesight for toddler.
2. Gadgets contribute to a reduction in both the quantity and quality of sleep
Second reason : Gadget is not good for the brain.
Detail : According to researchers at the University of Washington, they reveal that modern gadgets are not necessary in child’s development.
Third reason : Gadget can affect academic performance.
Detail : According to an article from USA Today, children that are exposed to 8.5 hours of television, video games, computers and other media every day may be losing the ability to concentrate.
Fourth reason : Gadget can cause tantrum for toddler.
Detail : According to a study commissioned by online retailer Pixmania, they revealed that eight out of 10 parents who have children ages 14 and under said that they confiscate gadgets as a form of punishment.
Concluding sentence : For these four reasons, I believe that gadget is harmful for toddler and it would not be a wrong strategy to ban gadgets for young children.
Gadget is Harmful for Toddlers
In my opinion, gadget is harmful for toddlers. First of all, gadget can cause many health issues in children, for example, damage eyesight and bad bedtime. Looking at screens is bad for eyes, especially for child’s development. Every new device that belongs to children increases the number of hours that children spend every day looking at screens and decreases the time spent looking at objects of varying distance, which is necessary for eyes health. The other is gadget is not good for bedtime. Gadget contributes to a reduction in both the quantity and quality of sleep. Gadget provides something entertaining to do late at night. Looking intently at bright screens before going to bed disturb the quality of sleep. Bad sleep can cause poor grades, behavior problems and variety of health issues. A second reason that gadget is harmful for toddler is that gadget is not good for the brain. Before children can utter their first words, child’s brains have learned a lot before the age of five. According to researchers at the University of Washington, they reveal that modern gadgets are not necessary in child development-child’s development on their speech and ability to read. In fact, children need time with their parents, not gadgets. Additionally, overexposure to gadgets has been linked to attention deficit, cognitive delays and impaired learning. A third reason that gadget is harmful for toddler is gadget can affect academic performance. Excessive gadget usage may affect child's academic performance. According to an article from USA Today, children that are exposed to 8.5 hours of television, video games, computers and other media every day may be losing the ability to concentrate. Children who spend long hours staring on screens usually complain less concentration on studies and missing out their essential sleep. It makes them peevish, grumpy, aggressive and they don’t take notice of anything going on around them until they finish with their gadget. A fourth reason that gadget is harmful for toddler is gadget can cause tantrum for toddler. “iPaddy” is a term coined for children who throw a tantrum when their electronic devices are taken away from them. According to a study commissioned by online retailer Pixmania, they revealed that eight out of 10 parents who have children ages 14 and under said that they confiscate gadgets as a form of punishment. Because children have grown attached to them, children throw tantrums. Gadgets are not only killing their social, personal and creative skills but also leaving negative impacts on their health. For these fourth reasons, I believe that gadget is harmful for toddler and it would not be a wrong strategy to ban gadgets for young children.
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Why Gadget is Harmful for Toddler?
Topic Setence: Gadget have four harmful effects for todder growth
Reason A: Not good for brain
Example : slow brain growth, lazy
Reason B: Emotional
Example : temprament, agresive ,egois
Reason C: Become unhealt
Example : lack of sleep, sore eyes , obbesitas
Reason D: Lost interact social
Example : Pasive, become individual character
Concluding sentence : All in all, these four effects are harmful for todder growth.
Paragraf
Why Gadget is Harmful for Toddler?
Many parents more like giving a gadget for their children to make them quiet and not doing many things. But they are not be awared if gadget have four effects harmful for toddler development. The first is not good for brain, the radiasi from gedget can make toddler’s brain getting slow growth. The cognitife slow growth , so difficult to consentrate. Spending time for play gedget can be other skill can’t development. The toddler become lazy, it will be different if the toddler play traditional game. The brain will creative because traditional gedget is real game so they need to think and body movement. It will be balance for the brain and body. The Second is emotional, the toddler will be easy tempramed when they lost or not get something they want. Gadget can be their habbit doing something easier when they play by gadget, and then the toddler become agresive and egois. They think all of people, friends if not according with them. They will do something like enemies. So, they can be easy to beat each other because it is effect from that game that they are not yet differentiate in the real. The third effect is become unhealth. The toddler will lack of sleep for spending time to play gadget. Then, take a nap, sore eyes,can be seen immediately after the toddler playing gadget for one hour. Their eyes colour will be red and fill poignant because of the effect from gadget radiation. The fourth reason is lost interaction social. The toddler will be passive, they are busy with their gadget so the relationship with the friends is very narrow and the relationship with environtment will be very bad. They become individual person. This condition is the result from addicted to gadget. All in all, these four effects are harmful for todder growth.
Name : Ria Novia
BalasHapusNIM : 20141111111
Why Gadget is Harmful for Toddler?
First reason: The bad effects for toddler’s health
Example 1: The health of toddler’s eyes
Example 2: The effect for brain (Focus and Radiation or Damage)
Second reason: Causes bad character for toddler
Example 1: Egoist
Example 2: Laziness
Example 3: Passiveness of the environment and societies
Third reason: Wasting quality of time
Example 1: Underestimate the rule (doing homework, etc.)
Example 2: Family’s time is laziest thing to do
Paragraph :
Why Gadget is Harmful for Toddler?
Gadget, an amazing thing but can be the harmful thing for toddler in three reasons. The first reason is the effects for toddler’s health. For example, playing gadget is one of toddler’s favorite things to do; sometimes it causes the parents too lazy or busy accompanying them studying or just only for playing at home. In this case, the toddlers will choose playing a gadget because they are still to small playing outside and of course it because of the parents forbid them to leave home for playing. Playing gadget over and over can make the toddler’s eyes health to be bad. Gadget has a full of gleam in every touch. Those gleams can break toddler eyes if they use gadget for long times, or all day long. For instance, the effect for toddle’s brain is the other danger cause of gadget. The toddlers cannot be easy to focus to anything else except gadget. How can it be? Gadget can make the toddler getting radiation and it cause the damage of their brain. The second reason is because gadget causes bad character for toddler. For example, playing gadget can make the toddler egoist. They will only focus to their gadget. They do not want to pay attention to everything around them because there is always gadget is the first thing. For instance, the laziness will be waiting for them. Gadget is a thing that can make everyone feel fun and forget everything, the user will always want to enjoy it without doing anything else so that the toddler will used to be lazy and that laziness will always continue until they are growing up. The other bad effect is passiveness of the environment and societies around them. The toddler used to be alone playing their gadget, without friends or anybody else. They will always think that only gadget can give them the happiness, and this effect can cause an easy going life style in the future. Third reason is wasting quality of time. The toddler actually must do something that they must do, for example play, study and etc. They will underestimate the rule such us doing their obligation in home because they used to waste their time in front of their gadget all the day. The other one is family’s time is laziest thing to do. Yeah… they actually will dislike something that disturb them in playing their gadget just like gather in the family room and making joke each other, laughing or just only watching television together will make them hating that situation. Gadget can be a good thing if we are as the parents can divide their right to play, study, and etc well. Over all, gadget is a wonderful thing but it is harmful for toddler because so many bad effects caused by gadget.
Name : Dewi Istiqomah
BalasHapusSID Number : 20141111105
Is gadget harmful for toddler?
Topic sentence: In my opinion, gadget is harmful for toddler
First reason : gadget can caused healthy problem for toddler
Detail : damaged eyesight, sleep Deprivation etc. Acoording In December 2013, Dr. Anthony Miller from the University of Toronto’s School of Public Health revealed that radio frequency exposure is clearly a threat to children. Healthy Child Healthy World acknowledges this rising radiation issue among children and gives tips on protecting your child from these harmful gadgets.
Second reason : toddler will Not Exposure To Nature
Detail : according to the article published in The New York Times, Dr. Gary Small, author of “iBrain:Surviving the Technological Alteration of the Modern Mind” and director if the Longevity Center at the University of California says that if children spend too much time on technology and less time with people, it hinders interaction and disrupts the normal communication skill development on children.
Third reason : Drastic Brain Development for toddler
Detail : the perfomance of academic will poor. According to University of Wisconsin assistant professor, Heather Kirkorian say that too” much gadgets may negatively affect a child’s brain on its functioning, and may even cause attention deficit, cognitive delays, impaired learning, increased impulsivity, and decreased ability to self-regulation”
Concluding sentence : for these three reasons, it proved that gadget is harmful for toddler, so parents must perform their responsibility of protecting their child.
Name : Dewi Istiqomah
BalasHapusSID Number : 20141111105
Is gadget harmful for toddler?
In my opinion, gadget is harmful for toddler. First of all gadget can caused healthy problem for toddler. Forexample damaged eyesight. Looking at screens is bad for eyes, especially for developing ones. Every new device that comes along increases the number of hours children spend every day looking at screens and decreases the time spent looking at objects of varying distance, which is necessary for good eyesight. Beside that children who get addicted to playing on their phones or tablets miss out on the needed rest. On other occasions, playing on their tablets becomes their sleeping pill. Without it, they become grumpy and aggressive. The Sleep Lady explains signs whether your toddler is suffering sleep deprivation and tips that you could do to help your toddler have a good night’s sleep. Acoording In December 2013, Dr. Anthony Miller from the University of Toronto’s School of Public Health revealed that radio frequency exposure is clearly a threat to children. Healthy Child Healthy World acknowledges this rising radiation issue among children and gives tips on protecting your child from these harmfulgadgets. A second reason is that toddler will not exposure to nature. Gadgets are killing the development of a child. Instead of getting out and learning the ways of the world, running and socializing with other kids, they would rather stay at home and play on their computer. Some parents who are overprotective find technology as helpful since they know that the safety of their child at home is secured. However, they fail to realize that the child is estranged from the natural world of plants, animals, lakes, and sky. Toddlers should be able to throw a ball, hop, skip, jump, run, call a friend by names, among others. Learn more about toddler milestones from Babycentre. This is one of the benefits of playing outside in playgrounds, they learn a lot from interaction, socialization, nature’s beauty, and life itself. according to the article published in The New York Times, Dr. Gary Small, author of “iBrain:Surviving the Technological Alteration of the Modern Mind” and director if the Longevity Center at the University of California says that if children spend too much time on technology and less time with people, it hinders interaction and disrupts the normal communication skill development on children. A third reason is Drastic Brain Development for toddler. Forexample the perfomance of academic will poor. According to University of Wisconsin assistant professor, Heather Kirkorian say that too” much gadgets may negatively affect a child’s brain on its functioning, and may even cause attention deficit, cognitive delays, impaired learning, increased impulsivity, and decreased ability to self-regulation”. Technology has been found to have its negative impact on academic performance on most of children. There are many technological gadgets to which children are addicted. They waste their valuable time on these silly gadgets without worrying about the studies. This is resulting in their poor academic performance. for these three reasons, it proved that gadget is harmful for toddler, so parents must perform their responsibility of protecting their child.
Why Gadget is Harmful for Toddler?
BalasHapusTopic Setence:some harmful effects for todder growth
Reason A: unsmart brain
Example : slow brain growth, lazy for doing something which is about studying
Reason B: Emotional
Example : temprament, agresive
Reason C: Become unwell conditions
Example : lack of sleep, sore eyes.
Reason D: Lost interact social
Example : Pasive, become individual character
Concluding sentence : to sum up , these some effects are harmful for todder growth.
Paragraf
Why Gadget is Harmful for Toddler?It is hard to find an expert who thinks that monitored and considered tablet use is harmful. Even Richard Graham, the doctor who was reported to have treated the four-year-old patient for iPad addiction,he thinks tablets are bad for children. Graham, lead consultant for technology addiction at the Capio Nightingale hospital in London, says that that "case", so eagerly taken up by the tabloids, comprised a single informal phone call with a parent, in which he gave advice. There was no followup treatment. He believes that "addiction" is a suitable word to use of such young children.
when the children addict of gadget the won't be able to waste the time for doing nothing without gadget or tab even though is about their education
The difficulty for parents is that the dangers of tablet use for children – if dangers exist – are as yet unidentified. Research is in its infancy. We know little about what is going on in a child's head while they are using a tablet. "Really very much at all at this point," (publish research in the spring). This is partly because it is hard to measure brain activity in someone who is moving, Until we know more, parents can only follow their own parenting instincts.they will be an emotional one cause changing mind of one focus "There is a school of thought that tablet use is rewiring children's brains, so to speak, to make it difficult for them to attend to slower-paced information.
Tablets are designed to mirror the world we know. They appear to operate intuitively, mimetically, responding to, reflecting and re-presenting the user's touch.But if we are focus on gadget in a few hours it would be an Ill of us of out eyes cause we force it to on every hours n make it dries Might the way tablets translate our sense of touch create a particularly intense.and gadget give them bad side effect of not knowing everyone around them. Cause their lack interact to others. It's really dangerous for their society feeling too.and it makes them social media as the people around them. to sum up , these some effects are harmful for todder growth.
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Reason A: Generally children in toddler period have high curiosity of something new that they never seen before.
Reason B: Many gadgets related with The Information and Technology (IT) area could be transformed to be addictive things in their daily routine especially for the games and movies.
Reason C: without realizing it electronic gadgets cause a few problems for the children’s body such as the radiation of television that intently and closely watched can make their eyes irritated, seeing problems, myopia, etc.
Reason D: Some electronic gadgets give instant access to do something that is continued to their future life and that is become bad education for the next generation, for instance using calculator, electric dictionary, and web site/ web blog containing many text that they need for.
Keep Away The Electronic Gadgets from The Toddlers.
Having children in the toddler period should be kept away from electronic gadgets around them. It is noticeable, if gadget is harmful for Toddler. The word of gadget does not mean if only cell phone, PC tablet, or television that we talk about in this discussion, but electronic gadgets are including blenders, mixers, electric fans, lamps, electric sockets, etc. The writer has four reasons why we must keep away our toddler from such electronic gadgets. First, generally children in toddler period have high curiosity of something new that they never seen before. It could be really dangerous for the gadget and also the toddler itself. Just imagine if our children touching a blender or a mixer which is still on using, because they are really curious about it. Second, many gadgets related with The Information and Technology (IT) area could be transformed to be addictive things in their daily routine especially for the games and movies. Moreover, those kinds of electronic gadgets could serve the children several negative effects for their brain and effected to their attitudes. The reader could see if many toddlers in several remote areas imitate many kinds of words from serial movies in the television stations and imitate fighting action based on the fighting games that they played. Third, without realizing it electronic gadgets cause a few problems for the children’s body such as the radiation of television that intently and closely watched can make their eyes irritated, seeing problems, myopia, etc. Headset which used to hear long term music can be one of the causing effects of brain cancer. Forth, some electronic gadgets give instant access to do something that is continued to their future life and that is become bad education for the next generation, for instance using calculator, electric dictionary, and web site/ web blog containing many text that they need for. It will be create future generation that like to copy-paste, calculating without right formulas, taking some vocabulary from dictionary without analyzing first and do not have any intention to learn. Those for reasons that the writer explain above, may give some additional knowledge to bring our toddlers become great persons in the future world. Indeed, stay to keep away several electronic gadgets around our toddlers because it is surely dangerous for them.
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BalasHapusNama: M.farhan
BalasHapusNIM: 20141111102
Gadget is Harmful for Toddlers
Topic: Prevent the Toddlers in Operating the Gadget
Several for reasons:
Reason A: Decreasing the creativities
Examples: Lazy to write and read, unable to analyze the problems
Reason B: Decreasing of social life
Example: Always stay lonely.
Reason D: Influencing life style
Example: Arrogant
Reason E: Decreasing the mentality
Example: Depression
Prevent the Toddlers in Operating the Gadget
Recently, many children have various peculiar characters. The children are in toddler where they have no ability enough to distinguish good and bad thing. The toddlers who often play the gadget when they can’t filter the jeopardy applications are in gadget can offend the toddlers’ characters. Remembering the negative effects of the gadget for the toddlers, parents should prevent their toddlers in using it more. There are several reasons why parents should prevent them from the gadget. First of all, gadget will decrease their creativities. Toddlers who often use it will be lazy to read books. They will spend their times by playing it and most of them prefer games to subjects. For examples, it will make them lazy to read and write. By the exciting pictures are in its screen make them indolent to read and write because reading and writing are bored so they like playing the games better than studying. Second, it will decrease their social life. For example, the decreasing of social life is negative effect of the gadget. They will not be so care with their environments and social ethic that they address each other rarely. It will be able to influence their life style. For examples, Toddlers often playing gadget will be arrogant to their friends and exhibit their capability in using it. Third, it will decrease their mental. For example, the employing of gadget irregularly will increase their anxiety, depression, interest and other characters. If gadget is often consumed, it will make them stress. The conclusion, the gadget will be able to decrease toddlers’ creativities, social life, mental and influence life style.
Name : Teddy Handoko
BalasHapusSID : 20141111014
Topic Sentence : “Why Gadget is Harmful for Toddler”
First Reason : inhibits growth.
Example : toddler with a gadget in hands will more sedentary and lazy to move.
Example : toddler will be less able to communicate well.
Second Reason : it can cause too rapid brain growth.
Example : stimulation of gadgets related to a lack of ability to control themselves.
Third Reason : radiation.
Example : children are more sensitive to radiation.
Fourth Reason : digital dementia.
Example : gadget can cause a decrease in the power of concentration and memory
Fifth Reason : addiction.
Example : as they often play games, makes them addicted.
Concluding Sentences : would be better if the parents keep the baby out of the gadget so that their babies grow in a healthy, active and normal.
Do you want your toddler to grow up healthy and normally on physical development and brain?
Every parent will always want to see the toddler growth, health or normally, so don’t let them play with a gadget too much, because at this time gadget be the one of the biggest threat for our toddler. Dear parents these are several reason “Why Gadget is Harmful for Toddler”. First of all, growth will be hampered. When the gadget stays in their hands it will lead them sedentary and lazy to move, moreover, it can cause a negative impact on language proficiency and achievement in school. Beside has a negative effect on their body and for the second reason it also can cause too rapid brain growth. Stimulus from a gadget can affect brain grow too fast and unfortunately stimulus coming from the gadget known to be associated with attention deficits, cognitive disorders, learning difficulties, impulsiveness, and lack of ability to control himself, so more disadvantages than advantages. Third reason, is the danger of radiation because the brain and immune system are still developing so that the risk of radiation problems of the gadget is greater than adults. A Fourth reason, it’s called “digital dementia”. Yes, the baby will have digital dementia because they decrease the power of concentration and memory. A scientist said the power of concentration and memory decrease because the part of the brain that play a role in doing that tends to shrink. A fifth reason is addiction due to a lack of parental (transferred also with a gadget), children tend to be closer to their gadget. In fact, it triggers addiction so that they could not seem to live without their gadgets. For several of the reasons above, it would be better if the parents keep the baby out of the gadget so that their babies grow in a healthy, active and normal. Of course the full attention of the parents is a baby needs in its development.