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Minggu, 12 Juni 2016
Definition Essay for 4th Semester Reg Students
Hi guys. After learning how to write a good definition essay in classroom meeting, I now eagerly want to see your outline of your essay. Please post your outline in the comment box below.
Name:Sitti Nurhayati Lolon Nim:20141111019 Out line:A Good Friend
1.Introduction paragraph A good friend is someone who knowsall about you,alwaysmake you fell happy when good time or bad,and always support you no metter what happened. Thesis statement:There are three qualities of a good friend 2.Body paragraph 1 -First quality of a good friend is be a positive person Example:They are a positive thingking about you 3.Body paragraph 2 -Second quality of a good friend is listener and understand Example:She or he as a good listener when you tell about your feeling or your problem,understand you and as a place to share the experience or to ask advice. 4.Body paragraph 3 -Another quality ofagood friend is Sense of humor and respect Example:she or he can always agree and welcome with your opinion and than always make you happy when you sad or when you depressed. 5.Conclution paragraph To sum up,friends are a pretty important part of most of people’s life in this world.A good friend is someone who knows all about you,always make you fell happy when good time or bad,and always support you no metter what happened.As a good friend have those of qualities such as, be a positive person, listener and understand ,and sense of humor and respect.
1.Introduction paragraph A good friend is someone who knows all about you,always makes you fell happy in good or bad time,and always supports you no metter what happen. Thesis statement:There are three qualities of a good friend (change this thesis statement with a broad definition of a good friend. It does not talk about the qualities. It talks about a definition.) 2.Body paragraph 1 (it is not about the quality. This paragraph must give a definition of a good friend. Give examples) -First quality of a good friend is be a positive person Example:They are a positive thingking about you 3.Body paragraph 2 (this paragraph may support the definition by using facts about a good friend.) -Second quality of a good friend is listener and understand Example:She or he as a good listener when you tell about your feeling or your problem,understand you and as a place to share the experience or to ask advice. 4.Body paragraph 3 (this paragraph may share a brief story about a good friend, showing a clue how a good friend must be.) -Another quality ofagood friend is Sense of humor and respect Example:she or he can always agree and welcome with your opinion and than always make you happy when you sad or when you depressed. 5.Conclution paragraph To sum up,friends are a pretty important part of most of people’s life in this world.A good friend is someone who knows all about you,always make you fell happy when good time or bad,and always support you no metter what happened.As a good friend have those of qualities such as, be a positive person, listener and understand ,and sense of humor and respect.
So, im looking forward to see the revision of your outline here before you write your essay. Keep the spirit! ^^
I. Introduction Optimist is a feeling or belief of person that good things will happen in the future. People who live in this world have definitely had some good and some bad things in their life. We just have to overlook the negative thing, and focus on the positive. Being optimistic is a key for getting a joyful whenever we face any kinds of situation in life. It makes every burden lighter by regarding burden as a challenge that could make us a strong person. This essay will present the benefits and briefly story of being optimistic.
II. Body 1 Being optimistic is a tool that keeps us happy. According to Ayo Olaniyan, the writer’s an article of BBC, being optimistic will lead to some benefits, such as increasing our level of motivation, and reducing the level of our frustrating and worries. The best way when we face the crucial thing is being optimistic. We have to just keep our chin. It leads to focus on positive thing for avoiding the anxiety.
III. Body 2 The definition of optimistic will mean properly if a person who has bad thing can overlook it and just focus on the positive. For instance, I got stumbling over a dress on the golden stage when I had story telling competition. This miserable thing was occurred when I was in junior high school. Getting shame would be definitely experienced, but I had to believe no matter has happened, and it would get better from here. So then, I would also be happy that I could have a funny experience which can be told to everyone in the future. Another one is when our friend is being a betrayer for cheating our work. Instead of blaming someone else, we just have to overlook it and attempts to have positive thinking that our work is good so that another one is interested in it. Furthermore, we can have more lexicons by redoing our work. Those are the cases of bad things that demand us for being optimistic. As long as there is still another door opens, we just have to open it by supporting optimism.
IV. Conclusion Thus, being optimistic is a key for getting a joyful whenever we face any kinds of situation in life. It makes every burden lighter by regarding burden as a challenge that could make us a strong person. Many negative experiences have happened in people’s life, and so do I. Getting a stumbling over a dress, and getting betrayal from a friend are examples of negative experiences. On the other hand, any kind of burden is lighter if we keep it in being optimistic. Somehow, we can be led to some benefits for being optimistic, such as increasing our level of motivation, and reducing our worries. Everything is coming up roses is kind of optimist idiom which is suitable for describing people who just overlook the negative thing. Getting the benefits in facing the situation is depending on how the way people straighten up the matters.
I. Introduction Thesis statement : an ideal spouse is a person who will make you comfortable with him or her .
II. Body a. An ideal spouse has to be honest each other for making your partner feel comfortable. ex. there are a lot of couples that have broken up , because of they began their relantionship with lies.
b. An ideal spouse has to love each others. ex. based on romeo and juliet story that has proved true love , and siti nurbaya can receive her couple just the way he is.
III. conclusion To sum up, every single thing that happen in our life is beautiful , when we could spend it with our ideal spouse. especially for an ideal spouse that make us feel cozy and happy.
II. Body a. An ideal spouse has to be honest each other for making your partner feel comfortable. ex. there are a lot of couples that have broken up, because they began their relantionship with lies.
b. An ideal spouse has to love each other. ex. based on Romeo and Juliet story that has proved true love, and Siti Nurbaya can receive her couple just the way he is.
III. conclusion To sum up, every single thing that happen in our life is beautiful, when we can spend it with our ideal spouse, especially for an ideal spouse that make us feel cozy and happy.
Elsadora Joswa I 20141111017 Good Friend • Intro: good friend is someone who always motivate and stand by your side no matter what. Sometimes we didn’t realized about our mistake that often we made. But when you have a good friend, they will remind you about what supposed what you must do. They will understand and never let you down. • Body a. A good friend is the place we share our problem in. They will give solution what it the best thing we must do. For the example about your daily activities makes you in long distance to have quality times together. Probably they will know it and understand clearly about your habit and give the solution to stay close each other. b. A good friend always take and give. You have to be a good person to have a good friend. The affection that they give to you means they care and understand what you really is. Based from my own experience when I was hospitalized my friend, hanna came to support me and make me feel batter. In any condition good friend always be in your side no matter you will be. • To sum up, a good friend is a good person who always understand by your side no matter what. They will remind you about what is bad and good. They always cheer you up when you have a problem and support what the best thing you choose. A good friend attend because they cares and realize also you are a good friend for them.
Good Friend • Intro: good friend is someone who always motivate and stand by your side no matter what. Sometimes we do not realize our mistake that we have often made. But when you have a good friend, they will remind you about what you supposed to do. They will understand and never let you down. • Body a. A good friend is the place we share our problem in. They will give solution what is the best thing we must do. For the example, your daily activities makes you in long distance to have quality times together. Probably they will know it and understand clearly about your habit and give the solution to stay close each other. b. A good friend always take and give. You have to be a good person to have a good friend. The affection that they give to you means they care and understand what you really is. Based on my own experience when I was hospitalized, my friend Hanna came to support me and make me feel better. In any condition good friend is always be in your side no matter you will be. • To sum up, a good friend is a good person who always understand by your side no matter what. They will remind you about what is bad and good. They always cheer you up when you have a problem and support what the best thing you choose. A good friend attends because they care and realize also you are a good friend for them.
Outline Definition Paragraph Nila Rachmania Devi / 2014 1111 021 One Side Love I.Intoductory Paragraph Thesis Statement : One side love is an unsatisfied feel when you are falling in love or when you are in relationship. II. Body Paragraph I Supporting Example : When your girlfriend/boyfriend doesn’t give his/her respond to your love. Supporting Example : When you are falling in love with someone but she/he couldn’t accept your love because he/she likes you as a friend. Supporting Annecdote : My friend Zia is falling in love with Pandu but Pandu couldn’t receive Zia’s love because Pandu loves Huda. III.Body Paragraph II Supporting Fact : According to Michael S. Brider, Ph.D in huffpost, one side love have a phsycological effect. IV.Concluding Paragraph : In short, one side love is love someone alone, without satisfaction of receiving their love in return.
One Side Love I.Intoductory Paragraph Thesis Statement : One side love is an unsatisfied feelING when you are falling in love or when you are in relationship. II. Body Paragraph I Supporting Example : When your girlfriend/boyfriend doesn’t give his/her respond to your love. Supporting Example : When you are falling in love with someone but she/he couldn’t accept your love because he/she likes you as a friend. Supporting Annecdote : My friend Zia is falling in love with Pandu but Pandu couldn’t receive Zia’s love because Pandu loves Huda. III.Body Paragraph II Supporting Fact : According to Michael S. Brider, Ph.D in huffpost, one side love have a phsycological effect. IV.Concluding Paragraph : In short, one side love is love someone alone, without satisfaction of receiving their love in return.
Thesis statement : Best friend is person who always support you whatever you do. They always give their shoulder when you cry and make you laugh. Body : - Best friend can be anyone. They can be your parents, your pair, and your soulmate. In all condition they will always to stay in your side. Different with person that you call friend. They just come when they need your help.
- For example when you have problem they always give suggestion to through the problem as parents that give suggestion to their child. Best friend also honest person. They will say the truth to you. Best friend will not leaved you alone. If you don’t have boy/girlfriend that you will invite to go together, you have your friend to go with you.
Conclusion : Best friend is more better than friend. It’s because friend can’t do what best friend do. You will feel glad if you have best friend that always understand you nd always in your side. You should have much best friend to complete your story in your life because best friend is person who always make you laugh and tell much joke to entertain you when you have problem to make you forget about it.
Name : Maziyatul Minnah Nissa NIM : 20141111031 Kinds of Love
I.Introduction Love is strong affection and personal interest in someone for all living beings, or it could be to an inanimate object. Such as humans, animals, plants etc. Everyone must be felt what love is. There are many kinds of love. II.Body 1 Everyone must be felt about love. Love can be for family,best friends,our pets and even for our spouse. Love also did not look at him/his ugly, beautiful, rich, or poor but love just need comfort and happiness when near the people whom we love that is called love. III.Body 2 Many stories about love that can inspire everyone. There are two couples who love each other, the man is very handsome, rich, smart and even generous. But man's choosing a life partner is a woman who is not beautiful and even her from a poor family, he also came from a village very far from urban centers. Many people who do not like the woman. The men chose her because she has a soft heart, kind and never had any bitterness toward someone who had been taunting him. IV.Conclusion Love teaches us ways that we can accept a person with strengths and weaknesses that they have. Don’t need feature but only requires excess in order to cover the shortage that we have.
I.Introduction Love is strong affection and personal interest in someone for all living beings, or it could be to an inanimate object, such as humans, animals, plants etc. Everyone must be felt what love is. There are many kinds of love. II.Body 1 Everyone must be felt about love. Love can be for family,best friends,our pets and even for our spouse. Love also did not look at his ugly, beautiful, rich, or poor but love just need comfort and happiness when near the people whom we love that is called love. III.Body 2 THERE ARE Many stories about love that can inspire everyone. There are two couples who love each other, the man is very handsome, rich, smart and even generous, but man's choosing a life partner, a woman who is not beautiful and even she comes from a poor family, she also came from a village very far from urban centers. Many people who do not like the woman. The men chose her because she has a soft heart, kind and never had any bitterness toward someone who had been taunting him. IV.Conclusion Love teaches us ways that we can accept a person with strengths and weaknesses that they have. Don’t need feature, but only requires excess in order to cover the shortage that we have.
Name: siti nur mulyani 20141111001 Honesty Thesis statement: Honesty is a someone characteristic who is tell something in truth and never lying there is not adding something and less something Body - Someone who is honest is someone given a trusteeship, as entrust to something so he/she must to keep it. for example is when a leader given a trusteeship must doing all of activities with honest. - Someone who is honest is has commitment if they have always honest in all condition. For example in the campus honest people never plagiarize and cheating although they have dificult duty. conclusion to sum up honesty is absolute thing in our life because honesty is important thing from identify a personality.
Thesis statement: Honesty is a someone's characteristic of not telling a lie, when he talks, he does not add something or less something. Body - Someone who is honest is someone with given a trusteeship, as entrust to something so he/she must keep it. For example, when a leader has been given a trusteeship, he must do all of activities with honest. - Someone who is honest is the one who has commitment if they have always honest in all condition. For example, in the campus honest people never plagiarize and cheat although they have dificult task. conclusion To sum up, honesty is absolute thing in our life because honesty is important thing to identify a personality.
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Thesis statement: Honesty is a someone's characteristic of not telling a lie, when he talks, he does not add something or less something. Body - Someone who is honest is someone with given a trusteeship, as entrust to something so he/she must keep it. For example, when a leader has been given a trusteeship, he must do all of activities with honest. - Someone who is honest is the one who has commitment if they have always honest in all condition. For example, in the campus honest people never plagiarize and cheat although they have dificult task. conclusion To sum up, honesty is absolute thing in our life because honesty is important thing to identify a personality.
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Introduction: Love is a present from god that had by all living things. All living things have to keep the love and share it, because love is the greatest thing in a life. As human we must know if the love is a present that have to hold until in the end of your life. That is way,you are have to keep and make your love be longlast. Longlasting love is how you always stay to keep your love and never put a lie and a deny Thesis statement : By read this essay, you will understand what the longlasting love Body I : Longlasting love is how you keep the reliance. You are never take your relitionship until in your last life if you are never trust your partner. In a couple a reliance is the important thing in a relitionship. For instance, if you have to study or work in another city and you must leave your partner. It means you do not know what your partner do and you can not see your partner in every single day. That is why, you have to keep the reliance to your partner to make your relitionship be longlast. Body II : Longlasting love is how you complete each other. Each human have a positive and negative charateristic. If you find a badness in your partner, you must complete it with your kindness. Complete each other will help you to take the relitionship be longlast because all badnees always cover by the kindness. In fact, iam as writer this essay still be childish and my partner always be my reminder to open my mind and act like woman. That situation always happen and it can be rolled back, sometimes he do not believe his self to do something but i give motivation and do it first to prove to him. Conclusion : A couple always have a wish that their relitionship be longlast, but most of them still failed and do not know what they should do to keep their relitionship. Make the relitionship be longlast is not easy and not hard too, you are only do everything that can make your relitionship be better in every single day. in short, longlasting love is how you defend your relitionship by keep the reliance and complete each other.
Introduction: Love is a present from god that had by all living things. All living things have to keep the love and share it because love is the greatest thing in a life. As human we must know if the love is a present that have to BE hold until in the end of your life. That is WHY,you have to keep and make your love longlast. Longlasting love is how you always stay to keep your love and never put a lie and a deny Thesis statement : By readING this essay, you will understand what the longlasting love IS. Body I : Longlasting love is how you keep the reliance. You never take your relitionship until your last life if you are never trust your partner. In a couple a reliance is the important thing in a relitionship. For instance, if you have to study or work in another city and you must leave your partner. It means you do not know what your partner do, and you can not see your partner in every single day. That is why, you have to keep the reliance to your partner to make your relitionship be longlast. Body II : Longlasting love is how you complete each other. Each human have a positive and negative charateristic. If you find a badness in your partner, you must complete it with your kindness. Complete each other will help you to take the relitionship longlast because all badneSS always IS coverED by the kindness. In fact, I AM STILL childish, and my partner always be my reminder to open my mind and act like woman. That situation always happen, and it can be rolled back, sometimes he do not believe hiM self to do something, but i give motivation and do it first to prove to him. Conclusion : A couple always have a wish that their relitionship longlast, but most of them still fail and do not know what they should do to keep their relitionship. Making the relitionship longlast is not easy and not hard too. You only do everything that can make your relitionship better in every single day. in short, longlasting love is how you defend your relitionship by keepING the reliance and completING each other.
Syaiful Rizal Outline Definition Paragraph The Dictator Introduction : Thesis statement A dictator is a person exercising absolute power,especially a ruler who has absolute,unrestricted control in a goverment without hereditary succession. In some country, there are policy of a goverment that applying system of dictator such as North Korea and also Indonesia have ever led by the dictator. Body I When you lived in North Korea you have to obey the orders of the president Kim Jong Un if not you will get death penalty. Example North Korea citizens forbidden watch all a television show except propaganda show conducted by the state. Body II In Indonesia has led by a dictator when the president soeharto. The right to speak and give opinion indonesian people restricted. Example Lost of student activist who protested in the state palace. Conclusion In short, a dictator above have made the people must follow the leader if they do not,they will getting punished.
Thesis statement A dictator is a person exercising absolute power, especially a ruler who has absolute, unrestricted control in a goverment without hereditary succession. In some country, there are policy of a goverment that apply system of dictator such as North Korea. Indonesia HAD also ever BEEN led by the dictator. Body I When you live in North Korea, you have to obey the orders of the president Kim Jong Un, UNLESS you will get death penalty. Example North Korea citizens ARE forbidden TO watch all television show, except propaganda show conducted by the state. Body II Indonesia haD BEEN led by a dictator IN THE REIGN OF President Soeharto. The INDONESIANS right to speak and give opinion WERE restricted. Example LotS of student activistS protested in the state palace. Conclusion In short, a dictator above have made the people must follow the leader. UNLESS,they will get punished.
test mam,sorry if I have mistakes. I don't have much time to do this essay :D :D :D
Pandu Suyekti Syamsu 20141111015 True Love I. Introductory Paragraph Thesis Statement: True love is a love that can’t be expressed with words, but it can just be sensed by our feeling in our heart. II. Body Paragraph I Supporting Fact: You will feel to have to do something to your parents or someone closed with you when they need help. III. Body Paragraph II Supporting example: When someone who I had ever liked has little problem, I had to help her without thinking at first, although I know that I will get nothing after I have helped her. IV. Conclusion To summarize, True love is a love that can only be expressed by our feeling without words. You need courage to reach it because true love is never failed.
Kindness is a spontaneous gesture of goodwill towards someone or something.
Body I:
Without we realizing, we are often to do something kind toward someone or something, because kindness is mostly a spontaneous gesture that appear from our deepest heart. For the example : when we see someone drops their thing, we will spontaneous alert the owner of that thing. For the real example, I have a friend called zia. She saw a little boy walked by himself in a mall without any adult around him. She spontaneously walked toward that little boy and helped him to found his parents.
Body II :
The kindness of someone only can be measured by a will and an effort to do that so called ‘good thing’. For the example : 2 persons are donating for an orphanage. The first person donated 1 million rupiahs, but that want his/her product to be promoted. Then, the second person only donated for 5 hundred rupiahs, without any other purpose. Another example, there is an event that will be held. There are two kinds of people. The first typical of people is do so much effort to create a very good event, but the other typical of person is prefer to pay for several money and don’t want to do something for the event.
Conclusion :
In short, kindness is a goodwill that naturally appears in everyone’s heart with or without their awareness to help someone or something.
Kindness is a spontaneous gesture of goodwill towards someone or something.
Body I:
Without realizing, we often do something kind toward someone or something because kindness is mostly a spontaneous gesture that appear from our deepest heart. For the example : when we see someone drops their thing, we will spontaneous alert the owner of that thing. For the real example, I have a friend called zia. She saw a little boy walked by himself in a mall without any adult around him. She spontaneously walked toward that little boy and helped him to FIND his parents.
Body II :
The kindness of someone only can be measured by a will and an effort to do that so called ‘good thing’. For the example : TWO persons are donating for an orphanage. The first person donated 1 million rupiahs, but that want his/her product to be promoted. Then, the second person only donated for 5 hundred rupiahs, without any other purpose. Another example, there is an event that will be held. There are two kinds of people. The first typical of people is do so much effort to create a very good event, but the other typical of person is prefer to pay for several money and don’t want to do something for the event.
Conclusion :
In short, kindness is a goodwill that naturally appears in everyone’s heart with or without their awareness to help someone or something.
I. Introductory Paragraph : Eternal love is a love that lasts forever.
II. Body Paragraph I : For example, Hachiko is a dog which is remembered in Japan for the amazing love. Its love showed to its master even in death. To give another example, my grandfather Jono, who lost his wife, he always decorate his wife room for remembering her.
III. Body Paragraph II : For Instance, a person who loves her partner so much and grow up together until they are old.
IV : Concluding Paragraph : In conclusion, eternal love is one of the perfect love that some people have. It shows that love can manipulate time without an end. It doesn't matter how long the journey of love has traveled, It will still be there 'on their hearts'.
Outline : A Good Friend 1. Introduction paragraph Thesis statement : A good friend is someone who knows all about you and always beside ypu in all situation. 2. Body paragraph 1 A good friend is more better than friend. They can understand you and they can support you when you in bad or good time. Base on my own experience when I got sick, my friend Nia come and support me and she can make me feel more better. 3. Body paragraph 2. Thus, A good friend is as a place that we can share our feeling or experience, They can give you solution when you have a problem. They also understand and never let you down. 4. Conclusion paragraph To sum up, a good friend is someone who love you, knows all about you and understand you. They will not leave you alone in the good or bad time.
Outline : A Good Friend 1. Introduction paragraph Thesis statement : A good friend is someone who knows all about you and always beside ypu in all situation. 2. Body paragraph 1 A good friend is better than just friend. They can understand you, and they can support you when you in bad or good time. Base on my own experience when I got sick, my friend Nia come and support me, and she can make me feel more better. 3. Body paragraph 2. Thus, A good friend is as a place that we can share our feeling or experience. They can give you solution when you have a problem. They also understand and never let you down. 4. Conclusion paragraph To sum up, a good friend is someone who love you, knows all about you and understand you. They will not leave you alone in the good or bad time.
Your idea is quite similar to Elsa's. If the main idea is the same, then please elaborate the supporting ideas differently.
sorry mom i'm late because i'm post this outlite in other part of this blogg Devi Al Afrida *2014 111 1023* Outline for finaly exams An ideal spouse I. Introductory paragraph Thesis statment : An ideal spouse is couple who has a love for manage their household. When we decided to get married, we daydream want to be a husband or a good wife, and wants atmosphere harmonious houshold. In this essay I would like to show tips and facts of ideal spouse. II. Body paragraph 1 Supporting facts : anyone who has tied a wedding would a harmonious household. So, should be considered first is how to harmonize the relationship of husand and wife. Maintain harmonious couple is not easy, but is requires effort and sacrifice. Many reported artist couples divorce, this is fact that to be an ideal spouse is not easy. III. Body paragraph 2 Suppotring examples : many tips that i will suggest for you all to be an ideal spouse, for example the artist couple that is Arman maulana and Dewi gita they have been married for 20 years they always attempting to know and understand their mate, concern and solidarity, etc. IV. Concluding paragraph Manage household is not easy because will be many problems and deferent opinion between wife and husband, but if we can to control it, we will be ideal spouse. Follow my tips and enjoyed your day with your mate.
Devi Al Afrida *2014 111 1023* Outline for finaly exams An ideal spouse I. Introductory paragraph Thesis statment : An ideal spouse is couple who has a love for manage their household. When we decided to get married, we daydream want to be a husband or a good wife, and wants atmosphere harmonious houshold. Many ideal spouse that will make others envy because they are look always happy and suitable. II. Body paragraph 1 Supporting facts : Many ideal spouse that will make others envy because they are look always happy and suitable. III. Body paragraph 2 Suppotring examples : sometimes the ideal partner indicate if they are the ideal partner to use a matching or similar clothing. IV. Concluding paragraph To summarize : an ideal spouse is couple that alwaays look homely, they will always appreciate their partner, although not together.
Name:Sitti Nurhayati Lolon
BalasHapusNim:20141111019
Out line:A Good Friend
1.Introduction paragraph
A good friend is someone who knowsall about you,alwaysmake you fell happy when good time or bad,and always support you no metter what happened.
Thesis statement:There are three qualities of a good friend
2.Body paragraph 1
-First quality of a good friend is be a positive person
Example:They are a positive thingking about you
3.Body paragraph 2
-Second quality of a good friend is listener and understand
Example:She or he as a good listener when you tell about your feeling or your problem,understand you and as a place to share the experience or to ask advice.
4.Body paragraph 3
-Another quality ofagood friend is Sense of humor and respect
Example:she or he can always agree and welcome with your opinion and than always make you happy when you sad or when you depressed.
5.Conclution paragraph
To sum up,friends are a pretty important part of most of people’s life in this world.A good friend is someone who knows all about you,always make you fell happy when good time or bad,and always support you no metter what happened.As a good friend have those of qualities such as, be a positive person, listener and understand ,and sense of humor and respect.
1.Introduction paragraph
HapusA good friend is someone who knows all about you,always makes you fell happy in good or bad time,and always supports you no metter what happen.
Thesis statement:There are three qualities of a good friend (change this thesis statement with a broad definition of a good friend. It does not talk about the qualities. It talks about a definition.)
2.Body paragraph 1 (it is not about the quality. This paragraph must give a definition of a good friend. Give examples)
-First quality of a good friend is be a positive person
Example:They are a positive thingking about you
3.Body paragraph 2 (this paragraph may support the definition by using facts about a good friend.)
-Second quality of a good friend is listener and understand
Example:She or he as a good listener when you tell about your feeling or your problem,understand you and as a place to share the experience or to ask advice.
4.Body paragraph 3 (this paragraph may share a brief story about a good friend, showing a clue how a good friend must be.)
-Another quality ofagood friend is Sense of humor and respect
Example:she or he can always agree and welcome with your opinion and than always make you happy when you sad or when you depressed.
5.Conclution paragraph
To sum up,friends are a pretty important part of most of people’s life in this world.A good friend is someone who knows all about you,always make you fell happy when good time or bad,and always support you no metter what happened.As a good friend have those of qualities such as, be a positive person, listener and understand ,and sense of humor and respect.
So, im looking forward to see the revision of your outline here before you write your essay. Keep the spirit! ^^
Rita Nurhalimah / 20141111011
BalasHapusOptimist Leads to Joyful
I. Introduction
Optimist is a feeling or belief of person that good things will happen in the future. People who live in this world have definitely had some good and some bad things in their life. We just have to overlook the negative thing, and focus on the positive. Being optimistic is a key for getting a joyful whenever we face any kinds of situation in life. It makes every burden lighter by regarding burden as a challenge that could make us a strong person. This essay will present the benefits and briefly story of being optimistic.
II. Body 1
Being optimistic is a tool that keeps us happy. According to Ayo Olaniyan, the writer’s an article of BBC, being optimistic will lead to some benefits, such as increasing our level of motivation, and reducing the level of our frustrating and worries. The best way when we face the crucial thing is being optimistic. We have to just keep our chin. It leads to focus on positive thing for avoiding the anxiety.
III. Body 2
The definition of optimistic will mean properly if a person who has bad thing can overlook it and just focus on the positive. For instance, I got stumbling over a dress on the golden stage when I had story telling competition. This miserable thing was occurred when I was in junior high school. Getting shame would be definitely experienced, but I had to believe no matter has happened, and it would get better from here. So then, I would also be happy that I could have a funny experience which can be told to everyone in the future. Another one is when our friend is being a betrayer for cheating our work. Instead of blaming someone else, we just have to overlook it and attempts to have positive thinking that our work is good so that another one is interested in it. Furthermore, we can have more lexicons by redoing our work. Those are the cases of bad things that demand us for being optimistic. As long as there is still another door opens, we just have to open it by supporting optimism.
IV. Conclusion
Thus, being optimistic is a key for getting a joyful whenever we face any kinds of situation in life. It makes every burden lighter by regarding burden as a challenge that could make us a strong person. Many negative experiences have happened in people’s life, and so do I. Getting a stumbling over a dress, and getting betrayal from a friend are examples of negative experiences. On the other hand, any kind of burden is lighter if we keep it in being optimistic. Somehow, we can be led to some benefits for being optimistic, such as increasing our level of motivation, and reducing our worries. Everything is coming up roses is kind of optimist idiom which is suitable for describing people who just overlook the negative thing. Getting the benefits in facing the situation is depending on how the way people straighten up the matters.
Outstanding. Outline approved. Find and revise some grammar error in 3rd paragraph.
Hapusfadilah fauziah lubis
Hapus20141111036
Outline : An Ideal Spouse
I. Introduction
Thesis statement : an ideal spouse is a person who will make you comfortable with him or her .
II. Body
a. An ideal spouse has to be honest each other for making your partner feel comfortable.
ex. there are a lot of couples that have broken up , because of they began their relantionship with lies.
b. An ideal spouse has to love each others.
ex. based on romeo and juliet story that has proved true love , and siti nurbaya can receive her couple just the way he is.
III. conclusion
To sum up, every single thing that happen in our life is beautiful , when we could spend it with our ideal spouse. especially for an ideal spouse that make us feel cozy and happy.
II. Body
Hapusa. An ideal spouse has to be honest each other for making your partner feel comfortable.
ex. there are a lot of couples that have broken up, because they began their relantionship with lies.
b. An ideal spouse has to love each other.
ex. based on Romeo and Juliet story that has proved true love, and Siti Nurbaya can receive her couple just the way he is.
III. conclusion
To sum up, every single thing that happen in our life is beautiful, when we can spend it with our ideal spouse, especially for an ideal spouse that make us feel cozy and happy.
Outline approved.
Elsadora Joswa I
BalasHapus20141111017
Good Friend
• Intro: good friend is someone who always motivate and stand by your side no matter what. Sometimes we didn’t realized about our mistake that often we made. But when you have a good friend, they will remind you about what supposed what you must do. They will understand and never let you down.
• Body
a. A good friend is the place we share our problem in. They will give solution what it the best thing we must do. For the example about your daily activities makes you in long distance to have quality times together. Probably they will know it and understand clearly about your habit and give the solution to stay close each other.
b. A good friend always take and give. You have to be a good person to have a good friend. The affection that they give to you means they care and understand what you really is. Based from my own experience when I was hospitalized my friend, hanna came to support me and make me feel batter. In any condition good friend always be in your side no matter you will be.
• To sum up, a good friend is a good person who always understand by your side no matter what. They will remind you about what is bad and good. They always cheer you up when you have a problem and support what the best thing you choose. A good friend attend because they cares and realize also you are a good friend for them.
Good Friend
Hapus• Intro: good friend is someone who always motivate and stand by your side no matter what. Sometimes we do not realize our mistake that we have often made. But when you have a good friend, they will remind you about what you supposed to do. They will understand and never let you down.
• Body
a. A good friend is the place we share our problem in. They will give solution what is the best thing we must do. For the example, your daily activities makes you in long distance to have quality times together. Probably they will know it and understand clearly about your habit and give the solution to stay close each other.
b. A good friend always take and give. You have to be a good person to have a good friend. The affection that they give to you means they care and understand what you really is. Based on my own experience when I was hospitalized, my friend Hanna came to support me and make me feel better. In any condition good friend is always be in your side no matter you will be.
• To sum up, a good friend is a good person who always understand by your side no matter what. They will remind you about what is bad and good. They always cheer you up when you have a problem and support what the best thing you choose. A good friend attends because they care and realize also you are a good friend for them.
Outline approved.
Outline Definition Paragraph
BalasHapusNila Rachmania Devi / 2014 1111 021
One Side Love
I.Intoductory Paragraph
Thesis Statement : One side love is an unsatisfied feel when you are falling in love or when you are in relationship.
II. Body Paragraph I
Supporting Example : When your girlfriend/boyfriend doesn’t give his/her respond to your love.
Supporting Example : When you are falling in love with someone but she/he couldn’t accept your love because he/she likes you as a friend.
Supporting Annecdote : My friend Zia is falling in love with Pandu but Pandu couldn’t receive Zia’s love because Pandu loves Huda.
III.Body Paragraph II
Supporting Fact : According to Michael S. Brider, Ph.D in huffpost, one side love have a phsycological effect.
IV.Concluding Paragraph :
In short, one side love is love someone alone, without satisfaction of receiving their love in return.
One Side Love
HapusI.Intoductory Paragraph
Thesis Statement : One side love is an unsatisfied feelING when you are falling in love or when you are in relationship.
II. Body Paragraph I
Supporting Example : When your girlfriend/boyfriend doesn’t give his/her respond to your love.
Supporting Example : When you are falling in love with someone but she/he couldn’t accept your love because he/she likes you as a friend.
Supporting Annecdote : My friend Zia is falling in love with Pandu but Pandu couldn’t receive Zia’s love because Pandu loves Huda.
III.Body Paragraph II
Supporting Fact : According to Michael S. Brider, Ph.D in huffpost, one side love have a phsycological effect.
IV.Concluding Paragraph :
In short, one side love is love someone alone, without satisfaction of receiving their love in return.
Great. Outline approved.
Shinta Desmalasari/20141111043
BalasHapusBestfriend
Thesis statement :
Best friend is person who always support you whatever you do. They always give their shoulder when you cry and make you laugh.
Body :
- Best friend can be anyone. They can be your parents, your pair, and your soulmate. In all condition they will always to stay in your side. Different with person that you call friend. They just come when they need your help.
- For example when you have problem they always give suggestion to through the problem as parents that give suggestion to their child. Best friend also honest person. They will say the truth to you. Best friend will not leaved you alone. If you don’t have boy/girlfriend that you will invite to go together, you have your friend to go with you.
Conclusion :
Best friend is more better than friend. It’s because friend can’t do what best friend do. You will feel glad if you have best friend that always understand you nd always in your side. You should have much best friend to complete your story in your life because best friend is person who always make you laugh and tell much joke to entertain you when you have problem to make you forget about it.
You should have MANY best friends to complete your story in your life because best friend
Hapusoutline approved.
Name : Maziyatul Minnah Nissa
BalasHapusNIM : 20141111031
Kinds of Love
I.Introduction
Love is strong affection and personal interest in someone for all living beings, or it could be to an inanimate object. Such as humans, animals, plants etc. Everyone must be felt what love is. There are many kinds of love.
II.Body 1
Everyone must be felt about love. Love can be for family,best friends,our pets and even for our spouse. Love also did not look at him/his ugly, beautiful, rich, or poor but love just need comfort and happiness when near the people whom we love that is called love.
III.Body 2
Many stories about love that can inspire everyone. There are two couples who love each other, the man is very handsome, rich, smart and even generous. But man's choosing a life partner is a woman who is not beautiful and even her from a poor family, he also came from a village very far from urban centers. Many people who do not like the woman. The men chose her because she has a soft heart, kind and never had any bitterness toward someone who had been taunting him.
IV.Conclusion
Love teaches us ways that we can accept a person with strengths and weaknesses that they have. Don’t need feature but only requires excess in order to cover the shortage that we have.
HapusI.Introduction
Love is strong affection and personal interest in someone for all living beings, or it could be to an inanimate object, such as humans, animals, plants etc. Everyone must be felt what love is. There are many kinds of love.
II.Body 1
Everyone must be felt about love. Love can be for family,best friends,our pets and even for our spouse. Love also did not look at his ugly, beautiful, rich, or poor but love just need comfort and happiness when near the people whom we love that is called love.
III.Body 2
THERE ARE Many stories about love that can inspire everyone. There are two couples who love each other, the man is very handsome, rich, smart and even generous, but man's choosing a life partner, a woman who is not beautiful and even she comes from a poor family, she also came from a village very far from urban centers. Many people who do not like the woman. The men chose her because she has a soft heart, kind and never had any bitterness toward someone who had been taunting him.
IV.Conclusion
Love teaches us ways that we can accept a person with strengths and weaknesses that they have. Don’t need feature, but only requires excess in order to cover the shortage that we have.
Outline approved.
Name: siti nur mulyani 20141111001
BalasHapusHonesty
Thesis statement:
Honesty is a someone characteristic who is tell something in truth and never lying there is not adding something and less something
Body
- Someone who is honest is someone given a trusteeship, as entrust to something so he/she must to keep it. for example is when a leader given a trusteeship must doing all of activities with honest.
- Someone who is honest is has commitment if they have always honest in all condition. For example in the campus honest people never plagiarize and cheating although they have dificult duty.
conclusion
to sum up honesty is absolute thing in our life because honesty is important thing from identify a personality.
Thesis statement:
HapusHonesty is a someone's characteristic of not telling a lie, when he talks, he does not add something or less something.
Body
- Someone who is honest is someone with given a trusteeship, as entrust to something so he/she must keep it. For example, when a leader has been given a trusteeship, he must do all of activities with honest.
- Someone who is honest is the one who has commitment if they have always honest in all condition. For example, in the campus honest people never plagiarize and cheat although they have dificult task.
conclusion
To sum up, honesty is absolute thing in our life because honesty is important thing to identify a personality.
Outline approved. Pay more attention on sentence structure and grammar error.
Thesis statement:
HapusHonesty is a someone's characteristic of not telling a lie, when he talks, he does not add something or less something.
Body
- Someone who is honest is someone with given a trusteeship, as entrust to something so he/she must keep it. For example, when a leader has been given a trusteeship, he must do all of activities with honest.
- Someone who is honest is the one who has commitment if they have always honest in all condition. For example, in the campus honest people never plagiarize and cheat although they have dificult task.
conclusion
To sum up, honesty is absolute thing in our life because honesty is important thing to identify a personality.
Outline approved. Pay more attention on sentence structure and grammar error.
Longlasting Love
BalasHapusFarah Diah Alfi
20141111039
Introduction:
Love is a present from god that had by all living things. All living things have to keep the love and share it, because love is the greatest thing in a life. As human we must know if the love is a present that have to hold until in the end of your life. That is way,you are have to keep and make your love be longlast. Longlasting love is how you always stay to keep your love and never put a lie and a deny Thesis statement : By read this essay, you will understand what the longlasting love
Body I : Longlasting love is how you keep the reliance. You are never take your relitionship until in your last life if you are never trust your partner. In a couple a reliance is the important thing in a relitionship. For instance, if you have to study or work in another city and you must leave your partner. It means you do not know what your partner do and you can not see your partner in every single day. That is why, you have to keep the reliance to your partner to make your relitionship be longlast.
Body II : Longlasting love is how you complete each other. Each human have a positive and negative charateristic. If you find a badness in your partner, you must complete it with your kindness. Complete each other will help you to take the relitionship be longlast because all badnees always cover by the kindness. In fact, iam as writer this essay still be childish and my partner always be my reminder to open my mind and act like woman. That situation always happen and it can be rolled back, sometimes he do not believe his self to do something but i give motivation and do it first to prove to him.
Conclusion : A couple always have a wish that their relitionship be longlast, but most of them still failed and do not know what they should do to keep their relitionship. Make the relitionship be longlast is not easy and not hard too, you are only do everything that can make your relitionship be better in every single day. in short, longlasting love is how you defend your relitionship by keep the reliance and complete each other.
Introduction:
HapusLove is a present from god that had by all living things. All living things have to keep the love and share it because love is the greatest thing in a life. As human we must know if the love is a present that have to BE hold until in the end of your life. That is WHY,you have to keep and make your love longlast. Longlasting love is how you always stay to keep your love and never put a lie and a deny Thesis statement : By readING this essay, you will understand what the longlasting love IS.
Body I : Longlasting love is how you keep the reliance. You never take your relitionship until your last life if you are never trust your partner. In a couple a reliance is the important thing in a relitionship. For instance, if you have to study or work in another city and you must leave your partner. It means you do not know what your partner do, and you can not see your partner in every single day. That is why, you have to keep the reliance to your partner to make your relitionship be longlast.
Body II : Longlasting love is how you complete each other. Each human have a positive and negative charateristic. If you find a badness in your partner, you must complete it with your kindness. Complete each other will help you to take the relitionship longlast because all badneSS always IS coverED by the kindness. In fact, I AM STILL childish, and my partner always be my reminder to open my mind and act like woman. That situation always happen, and it can be rolled back, sometimes he do not believe hiM self to do something, but i give motivation and do it first to prove to him.
Conclusion : A couple always have a wish that their relitionship longlast, but most of them still fail and do not know what they should do to keep their relitionship. Making the relitionship longlast is not easy and not hard too. You only do everything that can make your relitionship better in every single day. in short, longlasting love is how you defend your relitionship by keepING the reliance and completING each other.
GREAT. OUTLINE APPROVED.
Syaiful Rizal
BalasHapusOutline Definition Paragraph
The Dictator
Introduction :
Thesis statement
A dictator is a person exercising absolute power,especially a ruler who has absolute,unrestricted control in a goverment without hereditary succession. In some country, there are policy of a goverment that applying system of dictator such as North Korea and also Indonesia have ever led by the dictator.
Body I
When you lived in North Korea you have to obey the orders of the president Kim Jong Un if not you will get death penalty.
Example
North Korea citizens forbidden watch all a television show except propaganda show conducted by the state.
Body II
In Indonesia has led by a dictator when the president soeharto.
The right to speak and give opinion indonesian people restricted.
Example
Lost of student activist who protested in the state palace.
Conclusion
In short, a dictator above have made the people must follow the leader if they do not,they will getting punished.
Thesis statement
HapusA dictator is a person exercising absolute power, especially a ruler who has absolute, unrestricted control in a goverment without hereditary succession. In some country, there are policy of a goverment that apply system of dictator such as North Korea. Indonesia HAD also ever BEEN led by the dictator.
Body I
When you live in North Korea, you have to obey the orders of the president Kim Jong Un, UNLESS you will get death penalty.
Example
North Korea citizens ARE forbidden TO watch all television show, except propaganda show conducted by the state.
Body II
Indonesia haD BEEN led by a dictator IN THE REIGN OF President Soeharto.
The INDONESIANS right to speak and give opinion WERE restricted.
Example
LotS of student activistS protested in the state palace.
Conclusion
In short, a dictator above have made the people must follow the leader. UNLESS,they will get punished.
APPROVED.
test mam,sorry if I have mistakes. I don't have much time to do this essay :D :D :D
BalasHapusPandu Suyekti Syamsu
20141111015
True Love
I. Introductory Paragraph
Thesis Statement: True love is a love that can’t be expressed with words, but it can just be sensed by our feeling in our heart.
II. Body Paragraph I
Supporting Fact: You will feel to have to do something to your parents or someone closed with you when they need help.
III. Body Paragraph II
Supporting example: When someone who I had ever liked has little problem, I had to help her without thinking at first, although I know that I will get nothing after I have helped her.
IV. Conclusion
To summarize, True love is a love that can only be expressed by our feeling without words. You need courage to reach it because true love is never failed.
Hmmm who's your true love? 😏😄
HapusOutline approved.
Act of Kindness
BalasHapusThesis statement:
Kindness is a spontaneous gesture of goodwill towards someone or something.
Body I:
Without we realizing, we are often to do something kind toward someone or something, because kindness is mostly a spontaneous gesture that appear from our deepest heart. For the example : when we see someone drops their thing, we will spontaneous alert the owner of that thing. For the real example, I have a friend called zia. She saw a little boy walked by himself in a mall without any adult around him. She spontaneously walked toward that little boy and helped him to found his parents.
Body II :
The kindness of someone only can be measured by a will and an effort to do that so called ‘good thing’. For the example : 2 persons are donating for an orphanage. The first person donated 1 million rupiahs, but that want his/her product to be promoted. Then, the second person only donated for 5 hundred rupiahs, without any other purpose. Another example, there is an event that will be held. There are two kinds of people. The first typical of people is do so much effort to create a very good event, but the other typical of person is prefer to pay for several money and don’t want to do something for the event.
Conclusion :
In short, kindness is a goodwill that naturally appears in everyone’s heart with or without their awareness to help someone or something.
Kindness is a spontaneous gesture of goodwill towards someone or something.
HapusBody I:
Without realizing, we often do something kind toward someone or something because kindness is mostly a spontaneous gesture that appear from our deepest heart. For the example : when we see someone drops their thing, we will spontaneous alert the owner of that thing. For the real example, I have a friend called zia. She saw a little boy walked by himself in a mall without any adult around him. She spontaneously walked toward that little boy and helped him to FIND his parents.
Body II :
The kindness of someone only can be measured by a will and an effort to do that so called ‘good thing’. For the example : TWO persons are donating for an orphanage. The first person donated 1 million rupiahs, but that want his/her product to be promoted. Then, the second person only donated for 5 hundred rupiahs, without any other purpose. Another example, there is an event that will be held. There are two kinds of people. The first typical of people is do so much effort to create a very good event, but the other typical of person is prefer to pay for several money and don’t want to do something for the event.
Conclusion :
In short, kindness is a goodwill that naturally appears in everyone’s heart with or without their awareness to help someone or something.
Approved.
Abraham Dauddie P
BalasHapus20141111037
Eternal Love
I. Introductory Paragraph : Eternal love is a love that lasts forever.
II. Body Paragraph I :
For example, Hachiko is a dog which is remembered in Japan for the amazing love. Its love showed to its master even in death.
To give another example, my grandfather Jono, who lost his wife, he always decorate his wife room for remembering her.
III. Body Paragraph II :
For Instance, a person who loves her partner so much and grow up together until they are old.
IV : Concluding Paragraph : In conclusion, eternal love is one of the perfect love that some people have. It shows that love can manipulate time without an end. It doesn't matter how long the journey of love has traveled, It will still be there 'on their hearts'.
Approved.
HapusName : Sitti Nurhayati Lolon
BalasHapusNim : 20141111019
Outline : A Good Friend
1. Introduction paragraph
Thesis statement : A good friend is someone who knows all about you and always beside ypu in all situation.
2. Body paragraph 1
A good friend is more better than friend. They can understand you and they can support you when you in bad or good time. Base on my own experience when I got sick, my friend Nia come and support me and she can make me feel more better.
3. Body paragraph 2.
Thus, A good friend is as a place that we can share our feeling or experience, They can give you solution when you have a problem. They also understand and never let you down.
4. Conclusion paragraph
To sum up, a good friend is someone who love you, knows all about you and understand you. They will not leave you alone in the good or bad time.
Outline : A Good Friend
Hapus1. Introduction paragraph
Thesis statement : A good friend is someone who knows all about you and always beside ypu in all situation.
2. Body paragraph 1
A good friend is better than just friend. They can understand you, and they can support you when you in bad or good time. Base on my own experience when I got sick, my friend Nia come and support me, and she can make me feel more better.
3. Body paragraph 2.
Thus, A good friend is as a place that we can share our feeling or experience. They can give you solution when you have a problem. They also understand and never let you down.
4. Conclusion paragraph
To sum up, a good friend is someone who love you, knows all about you and understand you. They will not leave you alone in the good or bad time.
Your idea is quite similar to Elsa's. If the main idea is the same, then please elaborate the supporting ideas differently.
Approved.
sorry mom i'm late because i'm post this outlite in other part of this blogg
BalasHapusDevi Al Afrida *2014 111 1023*
Outline for finaly exams
An ideal spouse
I. Introductory paragraph
Thesis statment : An ideal spouse is couple who has a love for manage their household. When we decided to get married, we daydream want to be a husband or a good wife, and wants atmosphere harmonious houshold. In this essay I would like to show tips and facts of ideal spouse.
II. Body paragraph 1
Supporting facts : anyone who has tied a wedding would a harmonious household. So, should be considered first is how to harmonize the relationship of husand and wife. Maintain harmonious couple is not easy, but is requires effort and sacrifice. Many reported artist couples divorce, this is fact that to be an ideal spouse is not easy.
III. Body paragraph 2
Suppotring examples : many tips that i will suggest for you all to be an ideal spouse, for example the artist couple that is Arman maulana and Dewi gita they have been married for 20 years they always attempting to know and understand their mate, concern and solidarity, etc.
IV. Concluding paragraph
Manage household is not easy because will be many problems and deferent opinion between wife and husband, but if we can to control it, we will be ideal spouse. Follow my tips and enjoyed your day with your mate.
It is about tips and facts. It is about the definition of your topic.
BalasHapusChange your outline.
It is about tips and facts. It is about the definition of your topic.
BalasHapusChange your outline.
Devi Al Afrida *2014 111 1023*
BalasHapusOutline for finaly exams
An ideal spouse
I. Introductory paragraph
Thesis statment : An ideal spouse is couple who has a love for manage their household. When we decided to get married, we daydream want to be a husband or a good wife, and wants atmosphere harmonious houshold. Many ideal spouse that will make others envy because they are look always happy and suitable.
II. Body paragraph 1
Supporting facts : Many ideal spouse that will make others envy because they are look always happy and suitable.
III. Body paragraph 2
Suppotring examples : sometimes the ideal partner indicate if they are the ideal partner to use a matching or similar clothing.
IV. Concluding paragraph
To summarize : an ideal spouse is couple that alwaays look homely, they will always appreciate their partner, although not together.